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		By: Top Picks Thursday! For Writers &#38; Readers 08-08-2019 &#124; The Author Chronicles		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Top Picks Thursday! For Writers &#38; Readers 08-08-2019 &#124; The Author Chronicles]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 08 Aug 2019 19:47:31 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[[&#8230;] Melissa Donovan gives writers 21 ways to improve your writing, while Rachelle Gardner concentrates on that all-important first line. [&#8230;]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[&#8230;] Melissa Donovan gives writers 21 ways to improve your writing, while Rachelle Gardner concentrates on that all-important first line. [&#8230;]</p>
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		By: Andrew Budek-Schmeisser		</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 31 Jul 2019 15:44:12 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[The remnant-band of Aztecs which Bluey discovered had been depressed, but it took him only a moment to realize that the appropriate encouragement was not, &quot;Take heart!&quot;]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The remnant-band of Aztecs which Bluey discovered had been depressed, but it took him only a moment to realize that the appropriate encouragement was not, &#8220;Take heart!&#8221;</p>
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		By: Alnoor F Alnoor		</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 12 Aug 2017 15:01:52 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[The trickling water inside the bathroom, erected in the middle of the brick house, overshadowed the noise outside, but I thought that I heard something.

Would you like to read the next line?]]></description>
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<p>Would you like to read the next line?</p>
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		By: Kasam Tere Pyaar Ki		</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 05 Aug 2017 04:36:48 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Scared to death to post my first comment on an agent’s site.Loved a lot of these stories; and some I’ve read more than once. Thank you for these thoughts and insights.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Scared to death to post my first comment on an agent’s site.Loved a lot of these stories; and some I’ve read more than once. Thank you for these thoughts and insights.</p>
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		By: Star Else		</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 05 Aug 2017 04:35:39 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[“In a hole in the ground there lived a hobbit.”]]></description>
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		By: Deb Atwood		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Deb Atwood]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 04 Aug 2017 21:54:13 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Most of these are my favorites, too. Here are two more I love:

From Jane Eyre: &quot;There was no possibility of taking a walk that day.&quot;

I love how the author drops you right into the story.

From Snow Falling on Cedars: &quot;The accused man, Kabuo Miyamoto, sat proudly upright with a rigid grace, his palms placed softly on the defendant&#039;s table--the posture of a man who has detached himself insofar as this is possible at his own trial.&quot;

I&#039;m not a big fan of adverbs, but I do really like the word softly here as it seems such a contrast to the rest of the sentence.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Most of these are my favorites, too. Here are two more I love:</p>
<p>From Jane Eyre: &#8220;There was no possibility of taking a walk that day.&#8221;</p>
<p>I love how the author drops you right into the story.</p>
<p>From Snow Falling on Cedars: &#8220;The accused man, Kabuo Miyamoto, sat proudly upright with a rigid grace, his palms placed softly on the defendant&#8217;s table&#8211;the posture of a man who has detached himself insofar as this is possible at his own trial.&#8221;</p>
<p>I&#8217;m not a big fan of adverbs, but I do really like the word softly here as it seems such a contrast to the rest of the sentence.</p>
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		By: Camille Eide		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Camille Eide]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 04 Aug 2017 00:44:36 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I love clever. And beautiful. Especially both combined. 

One of my favorite first lines, to this day, is: 

Mick Brannigan&#039;s daddy only gave him one piece of advice when he was growing up, but he gave it to him on a number of occasions. He said, &quot;Son, you need to sit down and shut up.&quot; (the great turning points in Mick&#039;s life almost always hinged on things he wished he hadn&#039;t said, and yet it still came as a surprise to him when something he said got him dragged off the top of a twelve-story building and cost hi his job...)]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I love clever. And beautiful. Especially both combined. </p>
<p>One of my favorite first lines, to this day, is: </p>
<p>Mick Brannigan&#8217;s daddy only gave him one piece of advice when he was growing up, but he gave it to him on a number of occasions. He said, &#8220;Son, you need to sit down and shut up.&#8221; (the great turning points in Mick&#8217;s life almost always hinged on things he wished he hadn&#8217;t said, and yet it still came as a surprise to him when something he said got him dragged off the top of a twelve-story building and cost hi his job&#8230;)</p>
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		By: Bob Evans		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Bob Evans]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 03 Aug 2017 18:58:12 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I&#039;m going to cheat and do the first two lines but they are ones that have always stuck with me from the first time I read them.
&quot;&quot;Repeat after me,&quot; said the parson. &quot;I, Horatio take thee Maria Elon --&quot;
The thought came up in Hornblower&#039;s mind that these were the last few seconds which he could withdraw from something he knew to be ill-considered.&quot;]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m going to cheat and do the first two lines but they are ones that have always stuck with me from the first time I read them.<br />
&#8220;&#8221;Repeat after me,&#8221; said the parson. &#8220;I, Horatio take thee Maria Elon &#8211;&#8221;<br />
The thought came up in Hornblower&#8217;s mind that these were the last few seconds which he could withdraw from something he knew to be ill-considered.&#8221;</p>
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		By: Greg Levin		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Greg Levin]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 03 Aug 2017 16:14:05 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://rachellegardner.com/that-all-important-first-line/#comment-443826&quot;&gt;Greg Levin&lt;/a&gt;.

Oops -- just realized I provided the wrong link earlier. (This is why I rarely post blog comments in the a.m.) Here is the CORRECT link to &quot;25 of the Best Opening Lines in Literature&quot; ... 

http://greglevin.com/scrawl-space-blog/the-best-opening-lines-in-literature]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://rachellegardner.com/that-all-important-first-line/#comment-443826">Greg Levin</a>.</p>
<p>Oops &#8212; just realized I provided the wrong link earlier. (This is why I rarely post blog comments in the a.m.) Here is the CORRECT link to &#8220;25 of the Best Opening Lines in Literature&#8221; &#8230; </p>
<p><a href="http://greglevin.com/scrawl-space-blog/the-best-opening-lines-in-literature" rel="nofollow ugc">http://greglevin.com/scrawl-space-blog/the-best-opening-lines-in-literature</a></p>
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		By: Pat Iacuzzi		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Pat Iacuzzi]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 03 Aug 2017 16:11:54 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Scared to death to post my first comment on an agent&#039;s site.

Loved a lot of these stories; and some I&#039;ve read more than once. Thank you for these thoughts and insights.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Scared to death to post my first comment on an agent&#8217;s site.</p>
<p>Loved a lot of these stories; and some I&#8217;ve read more than once. Thank you for these thoughts and insights.</p>
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		By: Sonia G Medeiros		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Sonia G Medeiros]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 03 Aug 2017 15:27:40 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I love a good opening line. It has to set just the right tone. I agree about overly clever lines not really fitting.

One of my favorite opening lines is from The Gunslinger: &quot;The man in black fled across the desert, and the gunslinger followed.&quot; I wouldn&#039;t call it clever, but it stuck with me.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I love a good opening line. It has to set just the right tone. I agree about overly clever lines not really fitting.</p>
<p>One of my favorite opening lines is from The Gunslinger: &#8220;The man in black fled across the desert, and the gunslinger followed.&#8221; I wouldn&#8217;t call it clever, but it stuck with me.</p>
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		By: Sue Arroyo		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Sue Arroyo]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 03 Aug 2017 15:05:08 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://rachellegardner.com/that-all-important-first-line/#comment-443630&quot;&gt;Abbe Hoggan&lt;/a&gt;.

The first line from Rebecca is my favorite too.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://rachellegardner.com/that-all-important-first-line/#comment-443630">Abbe Hoggan</a>.</p>
<p>The first line from Rebecca is my favorite too.</p>
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		By: Laura		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Laura]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 03 Aug 2017 14:56:03 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Several of the ones previously mentioned are some of my favorites, as well.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Several of the ones previously mentioned are some of my favorites, as well.</p>
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		By: Laura		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Laura]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 03 Aug 2017 14:49:21 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[The cold passed reluctantly from the earth, and the retiring fogs revealed an army stretched out on the hills, resting. The Red Badge of Courage]]></description>
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