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		By: Julie @ HappinessSavouredHot		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Julie @ HappinessSavouredHot]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 18 Jan 2016 00:49:28 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Haha, this made me laugh. The most important thing I remember from reading the Writer&#039;s Market was precisely to avoid sounding overconfident and condescending. Thank you for the reminder!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Haha, this made me laugh. The most important thing I remember from reading the Writer&#8217;s Market was precisely to avoid sounding overconfident and condescending. Thank you for the reminder!</p>
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		By: Gwen		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Gwen]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 16 Jan 2016 19:28:07 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[This might be making me sound grandiose - but I like writing things different. And that comes from (sorta) knowing what&#039;s out there. I like knowing the tropes and twisting them, taking common expectations and then not meeting them. But I also fully expect to not know the market fully. There are - sadly - wa~ay to many books in the world for me to read.

In that way though, I figure there are books similar to mine (though I want to be unique!)and I&#039;m not above admitting to that. After all, those readers might be my readers some day ^_^

Thanks though for the examples of how *not* to present yourself.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This might be making me sound grandiose &#8211; but I like writing things different. And that comes from (sorta) knowing what&#8217;s out there. I like knowing the tropes and twisting them, taking common expectations and then not meeting them. But I also fully expect to not know the market fully. There are &#8211; sadly &#8211; wa~ay to many books in the world for me to read.</p>
<p>In that way though, I figure there are books similar to mine (though I want to be unique!)and I&#8217;m not above admitting to that. After all, those readers might be my readers some day ^_^</p>
<p>Thanks though for the examples of how *not* to present yourself.</p>
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		By: Anne Sweazy-Kulju		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Anne Sweazy-Kulju]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 14 Jan 2016 23:01:21 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Hi Rachelle, 

A while back, I stumbled across a blog post of yours that lead me here. I have been enjoying your website for more than a year now, and I have to say, I love your plain-talking way of training us willy writers. I have never found you to be disrespectful, even when it is called for. 

On the flip side, I have no respect for anyone named&quot;Anonymous&quot;, and feel the same about their posts--which are usually drive-by bashings of you or one of your followers. Folks, if you believe in what you are saying, put your name to it, Coward. If you don&#039;t stand behind your reply, why are you wasting our collective time posting your dribble?

I thought it was a great post, Rachelle. I, myself, would never be so cocky in a query, but there is lots of useful info in here. Thank you!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Rachelle, </p>
<p>A while back, I stumbled across a blog post of yours that lead me here. I have been enjoying your website for more than a year now, and I have to say, I love your plain-talking way of training us willy writers. I have never found you to be disrespectful, even when it is called for. </p>
<p>On the flip side, I have no respect for anyone named&#8221;Anonymous&#8221;, and feel the same about their posts&#8211;which are usually drive-by bashings of you or one of your followers. Folks, if you believe in what you are saying, put your name to it, Coward. If you don&#8217;t stand behind your reply, why are you wasting our collective time posting your dribble?</p>
<p>I thought it was a great post, Rachelle. I, myself, would never be so cocky in a query, but there is lots of useful info in here. Thank you!</p>
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		By: Sheena-kay Graham		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Sheena-kay Graham]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 14 Jan 2016 22:21:01 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[A very good food for thought.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>A very good food for thought.</p>
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		By: Mark R Hunter		</title>
		<link>https://rachellegardner.com/utterly-original/#comment-443330</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Mark R Hunter]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 14 Jan 2016 10:04:53 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[On the other hand, saying &quot;This book is like Harry Potter, only better, and will be even more successful&quot; also isn&#039;t the best move.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>On the other hand, saying &#8220;This book is like Harry Potter, only better, and will be even more successful&#8221; also isn&#8217;t the best move.</p>
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		By: Edward		</title>
		<link>https://rachellegardner.com/utterly-original/#comment-443329</link>

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		<pubDate>Wed, 13 Jan 2016 20:57:31 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I&#039;ve actually received rejection notes from publishers who have referred to my manuscript as &quot;unique.&quot; This is despite listing comparable works when I submit it. I&#039;ve come to realize that it was an issue of audience. I was targeting the inspirational market. My comparable works were shelved in literary fiction. I&#039;ve since rewritten my work to tamp down on the inspirational aspects.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;ve actually received rejection notes from publishers who have referred to my manuscript as &#8220;unique.&#8221; This is despite listing comparable works when I submit it. I&#8217;ve come to realize that it was an issue of audience. I was targeting the inspirational market. My comparable works were shelved in literary fiction. I&#8217;ve since rewritten my work to tamp down on the inspirational aspects.</p>
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		By: Chris Crawford		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Chris Crawford]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 13 Jan 2016 19:33:05 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I&#039;ve got a question, if you don&#039;t mind. I believe my WIP is original, yet it pulls elements from many other books into it. For instance:

Paced and structured similar to &quot;The Maze Runner&quot;
Takes place in Heaven and Hell like &quot;What Dreams May Come&quot;
Uses a plot device akin to Philip Jose Farmer&#039;s &quot;Riverworld&quot;
Romance and rival families like &quot;Romeo and Juliet&quot;
Mixes elements of magical fantasy and science fiction

I&#039;m still a few months away from query stage, but I&#039;ve been thinking about how exactly to explain this. In addition, some comparables might be negative (like Maze Runner) since dystopian is not exactly in publishing demand these days and my book isn&#039;t a dystopia.

In short, what exactly makes a book similar enough to mention as a similar title? Is it wise to claim &quot;aaa&quot; meets &quot;bbb&quot; meets &quot;ccc&quot; meets &quot;ddd&quot;?]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;ve got a question, if you don&#8217;t mind. I believe my WIP is original, yet it pulls elements from many other books into it. For instance:</p>
<p>Paced and structured similar to &#8220;The Maze Runner&#8221;<br />
Takes place in Heaven and Hell like &#8220;What Dreams May Come&#8221;<br />
Uses a plot device akin to Philip Jose Farmer&#8217;s &#8220;Riverworld&#8221;<br />
Romance and rival families like &#8220;Romeo and Juliet&#8221;<br />
Mixes elements of magical fantasy and science fiction</p>
<p>I&#8217;m still a few months away from query stage, but I&#8217;ve been thinking about how exactly to explain this. In addition, some comparables might be negative (like Maze Runner) since dystopian is not exactly in publishing demand these days and my book isn&#8217;t a dystopia.</p>
<p>In short, what exactly makes a book similar enough to mention as a similar title? Is it wise to claim &#8220;aaa&#8221; meets &#8220;bbb&#8221; meets &#8220;ccc&#8221; meets &#8220;ddd&#8221;?</p>
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		By: Kell Brigan		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Kell Brigan]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 13 Jan 2016 16:37:09 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://rachellegardner.com/utterly-original/#comment-36720&quot;&gt;Lance Albury&lt;/a&gt;.

I&#039;d say get to know Boolian search techniques. 

https://www.exploratorium.edu/lc/search/boolean.html]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://rachellegardner.com/utterly-original/#comment-36720">Lance Albury</a>.</p>
<p>I&#8217;d say get to know Boolian search techniques. </p>
<p><a href="https://www.exploratorium.edu/lc/search/boolean.html" rel="nofollow ugc">https://www.exploratorium.edu/lc/search/boolean.html</a></p>
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		By: Kell Brigan		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Kell Brigan]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 13 Jan 2016 16:35:00 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://rachellegardner.com/utterly-original/#comment-36717&quot;&gt;Anonymous&lt;/a&gt;.

&quot;You&#039;re so vain, you probably think this query&#039;s about you...&quot;

(Couldn&#039;t resist.)]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://rachellegardner.com/utterly-original/#comment-36717">Anonymous</a>.</p>
<p>&#8220;You&#8217;re so vain, you probably think this query&#8217;s about you&#8230;&#8221;</p>
<p>(Couldn&#8217;t resist.)</p>
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		By: Kell Brigan		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Kell Brigan]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 13 Jan 2016 16:26:22 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Interesting. When I read the first line, my first thought was &quot;House of Leaves?&quot; But, then, I decided to figure out what&#039;s similar to &quot;House.&quot; All I came up with was &quot;post-modern epistolary, incorporating the experience of reading hypertext within a hard copy format.&quot; Which means, yeah, it&#039;s unique (or was -- we&#039;ve had other hypertextish stuff since then), but not beyond description. 

(My current project is a cozy for middle-aged, probably-but-not-necessarily-female science geeks. Comps: yeah, all the cozies, but there is that part of me that says it&#039;s filling a sub-niche that hasn&#039;t quite been tackled yet. Lifetime did do a movie about an astronomer once...)]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Interesting. When I read the first line, my first thought was &#8220;House of Leaves?&#8221; But, then, I decided to figure out what&#8217;s similar to &#8220;House.&#8221; All I came up with was &#8220;post-modern epistolary, incorporating the experience of reading hypertext within a hard copy format.&#8221; Which means, yeah, it&#8217;s unique (or was &#8212; we&#8217;ve had other hypertextish stuff since then), but not beyond description. </p>
<p>(My current project is a cozy for middle-aged, probably-but-not-necessarily-female science geeks. Comps: yeah, all the cozies, but there is that part of me that says it&#8217;s filling a sub-niche that hasn&#8217;t quite been tackled yet. Lifetime did do a movie about an astronomer once&#8230;)</p>
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		By: Rachelle Gardner		</title>
		<link>https://rachellegardner.com/utterly-original/#comment-443324</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Rachelle Gardner]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 13 Jan 2016 15:40:29 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://rachellegardner.com/utterly-original/#comment-443318&quot;&gt;Sue Coletta&lt;/a&gt;.

Haha, so true, Sue. I&#039;m losing sleep over this one! :-) 

Really though, if one focuses on the audience rather than the specific topic of the book (as in my discussion with Anthony in the comment above), it&#039;s not that hard to find books to compare with yours.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://rachellegardner.com/utterly-original/#comment-443318">Sue Coletta</a>.</p>
<p>Haha, so true, Sue. I&#8217;m losing sleep over this one! 🙂 </p>
<p>Really though, if one focuses on the audience rather than the specific topic of the book (as in my discussion with Anthony in the comment above), it&#8217;s not that hard to find books to compare with yours.</p>
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		By: Rachelle Gardner		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Rachelle Gardner]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 13 Jan 2016 15:38:51 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://rachellegardner.com/utterly-original/#comment-443321&quot;&gt;Anthony Renfro&lt;/a&gt;.

Anthony, that is exactly the advice I give writers in regards to coming up with comparable books. Ask yourself, &quot;What are my readers already reading?&quot; Focus on the audience more than the book. Great job!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://rachellegardner.com/utterly-original/#comment-443321">Anthony Renfro</a>.</p>
<p>Anthony, that is exactly the advice I give writers in regards to coming up with comparable books. Ask yourself, &#8220;What are my readers already reading?&#8221; Focus on the audience more than the book. Great job!</p>
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		By: Claudette Renalds		</title>
		<link>https://rachellegardner.com/utterly-original/#comment-443322</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Claudette Renalds]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 13 Jan 2016 13:11:01 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://rachellegardner.com/utterly-original/#comment-36707&quot;&gt;Kathleen Rouser&lt;/a&gt;.

I agree. When I read other books it makes me appreciate the wonderful writers in the Christian book market. Rachelle&#039;s post was a nice chuckle with my morning coffee.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://rachellegardner.com/utterly-original/#comment-36707">Kathleen Rouser</a>.</p>
<p>I agree. When I read other books it makes me appreciate the wonderful writers in the Christian book market. Rachelle&#8217;s post was a nice chuckle with my morning coffee.</p>
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		By: Anthony Renfro		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Anthony Renfro]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 13 Jan 2016 12:38:56 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I have the most original comment to post here - kidding. I can&#039;t believe in this tough market for writers people don&#039;t do more research. One of my books is tough to categorize, so I lean more to the audience it will be read by. I put that in my query - this book would fit in with such and such reading audience. No accepts, but a lot of replies back. Guess that is something.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I have the most original comment to post here &#8211; kidding. I can&#8217;t believe in this tough market for writers people don&#8217;t do more research. One of my books is tough to categorize, so I lean more to the audience it will be read by. I put that in my query &#8211; this book would fit in with such and such reading audience. No accepts, but a lot of replies back. Guess that is something.</p>
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