The One-Sentence Summary

*Contest is closed.*

Today we’re going to talk about the one-sentence summary, also known as a logline, a hook, or a one-sentence pitch. (It is not a tagline, however.)

What: About 25 words that capture your novel, memoir, or non-fiction book.

Why: To get someone interested in reading your book.

When to use it: The start of a query, or anytime someone asks you, “What’s your book about?”

What it does: A one-sentence summary takes your complex book with multiple characters and plotlines and boils it down into a simple statement that can be quickly conveyed and understood, and generates interest in the book.

What it should include:
→ A character or two
→ Their choice, conflict, or goal
→ What’s at stake (may be implied)
→ Action that will get them to the goal
→ Setting (if important)

Tips:
→ Keep it simple. One plotline, 1 or 2 characters.
→ Use the strongest nouns, verbs and adjectives.
→ Make the conflict clear but you don’t have to hint at the solution.

In your one-sentence summary, try not to pitch a theme. Pitch what happens. Examples of themes:

This book explores forgiveness.
This book looks at the thin line between right and wrong.
This book explores the meaning of independence, and asks if it’s really possible.

Here is Nathan Bransford’s simplified formula for a one-sentence pitch: “When [opening conflict] happens to [character(s)], they must [overcome conflict] to [complete their quest].”

Examples of one-sentence summaries:

Harry Potter And The Sorcerer’s Stone by J.K. Rowling
• A boy wizard begins training and must battle for his life with the Dark Lord who murdered his parents. (Thanks Randy Ingermanson for this one.)

→ Character=boy wizard
→ Conflict=battling the Dark Lord
→ Stakes=his life
→ Setting=none
→ Action=wizard training; avoiding the same fate as his parents

The Help by Kathryn Stockett
• In the south in the 1960s, three women cross racial boundaries to begin a movement that will forever change their town and the way women view one another.

When Faith Awakes by Mike Duran
• Chaos is unleashed on a quiet coastal town when an unassuming crippled woman raises a young boy from the dead, unlocking a centuries-old curse.

Medical Error by Richard Mabry
• Identity theft becomes fatal for a patient and puts a young doctor’s reputation and medical practice in jeopardy.

Chasing Superwoman by Susan DiMickele
• A successful attorney and mother of three battles discrimination, exhaustion, and a clueless boss while balancing a career, a family, and a life of faith.

NOW IT’S YOUR TURN. Leave your one-sentence summary in the comments.

Contest specifics:
→ Write a one-sentence summary of your book.
→ Submit your entry in the comments to THIS post.
→ ONE entry per person. NO revisions or resubmissions allowed.
→ Deadline is this SATURDAY, June 5th, 11:59pm ET.
→ WordServe clients can enter and are eligible for the prize.
→ I’ll choose FIVE winners, based on which ones are the most effective and make me want to read the book.
→ I’ll announce winners next week.

***THE AWESOME PRIZES ***
Courtesy of Chuck Sambuchino at Writers Digest, author of Guide to Literary Agents and the GLA blog.

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Join the fun and start crafting your pitch!

Rachelle Gardner, Literary Agent

Rachelle Gardner

Literary agent at Gardner Literary. Coffee & wine enthusiast (not at the same time) and dark chocolate connoisseur. I've worked in publishing since 1995 and I love talking about books!

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    When your friend’s world is rocked by a sudden death, know what to do during the initial hours, early days and months using this one-of-a-kind quick reference.



  37. Deleyna on June 5, 2010 at 6:55 PM

    >An abused woman escapes to Paris where she learns the truth of her creation, finds her vanished champion, and battles demons to free her sisters.



  38. Lindsay on June 5, 2010 at 6:43 PM

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  39. Lyn Fairchild Hawks on June 5, 2010 at 6:21 PM

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  40. Felicity Bloomfield on June 5, 2010 at 6:04 PM

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    An accident-prone missionary stumbles through an Australian party, discovering secrets about her origins and sexuality. Does she still have the courage to make a difference?

    Felicity



  41. MJ Carpenter on June 5, 2010 at 5:53 PM

    >Inaroha, a modern day Joan D’Arc meets the beautiful and dark world of Irish mythology.



  42. Carol Benedict on June 5, 2010 at 5:50 PM

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  49. Elise M Stone on June 5, 2010 at 4:14 PM

    >When Faith Andersen befriends the fiance of a grad student wrongly convicted of murder, her quest for the truth draws her into a world of drug dealers and human smugglers; and a life-changing experience in the Arizona desert.



  50. Jeannie on June 5, 2010 at 3:59 PM

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  51. Jack Boyd on June 5, 2010 at 3:50 PM

    >After serving as a silent witness to countless human evils, one guardian angel finds his faith strained as he begins to question the rules of intervention and the consequences involved for disobeying them.



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  53. Sarah N Fisk on June 5, 2010 at 3:11 PM

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  54. Paul on June 5, 2010 at 2:47 PM

    >The Surface of the Deep

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  55. Jillian Audrey on June 5, 2010 at 2:10 PM

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  56. AudryT on June 5, 2010 at 2:04 PM

    >When a dangerous romance puts two teenage girls on opposing sides of a supernatural war, they must choose between their lifelong friendship and the survival of the human race.



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  58. chrisennen on June 5, 2010 at 1:34 PM

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  59. Lynnette Bonner on June 5, 2010 at 1:27 PM

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    Upon the death of her husband, Nicki Trent is forced to combat greedy bankers, covetous ranchers, and a mysterious arsonist to retain her ranch for her son.



  60. Anonymous on June 5, 2010 at 12:23 PM

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    A fishing guide and his former lover, a young widow reunite when his brother is killed and evidence points to her husband’s paroled murderer.



  61. Kathy on June 5, 2010 at 12:19 PM

    >Like a butterfly, God's voice for the first time alighted on her heart, but as a question, a question He would answer by drawing her into His Word.



  62. Amy on June 5, 2010 at 12:15 PM

    >When a stalker invades Jack Tucker’s uncomplicated life, he discovers that love doesn’t change who you are, but instead shows you why you live.



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    Title of my current WIP: STRONG MOMS DO MORE THAN GO TO THE GYM



  64. Christie C. on June 5, 2010 at 11:41 AM

    >Julianne learns the abbess of her convent has been hiding startling secrets about her past—and Julianne’s—when she is sent into plague-ridden London at night on a dangerous mission.



  65. Portermaker on June 5, 2010 at 11:32 AM

    >Peter Robertson serves on the jury for the trial of a murder that he committed.



  66. Café Lopez on June 5, 2010 at 11:24 AM

    >The Dead Don't Cry –
    Worlds collide when an extraordinary girl determined to save her father wanders into an ancient wilderness embroiled in a life or death struggle against a legacy of tyranny.



  67. Bonnie Eckert on June 5, 2010 at 11:09 AM

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  68. Felix Galvan on June 5, 2010 at 11:07 AM

    >When the Harrison family is draggedinto the mysterious and strange world of occult cooking, the family dog must save the day when things go from the frying pan into the fire!



  69. writerashley on June 5, 2010 at 10:19 AM

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  70. Ladonna on June 5, 2010 at 10:14 AM

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    >A Christian man dead to the church and all things religious must decide whether his daughter’s death at the foot of the altar is an act of murder or a modern-day miracle.



  72. K J Pascoe on June 5, 2010 at 9:18 AM

    >In a good faith gesture a young prince becomes the unwilling custodian of a drug-addicted prisoner of war, who makes him question the truths he has accepted his whole life.



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  74. Kristi on June 5, 2010 at 9:09 AM

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  75. Marysue on June 5, 2010 at 8:28 AM

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  76. Arvael O'Tierney on June 5, 2010 at 7:18 AM

    >My one-sentence summary:

    "When Olivia accidentally becomes part of the supernatural world, she must learn to control her chaotic life, lest she hurts people close to her."

    (24 words)



  77. Jessica Nelson on June 5, 2010 at 6:35 AM

    >A rule-bending PI falls in love with a by-the-book cop who's determined to stop her investigation of a corrupt mayor.



  78. Tura Lura on June 5, 2010 at 4:47 AM

    >When a group of rogue vampires begin their subtle attack on the Elven Nation, it is up to priestess-in-training Elika and former prince Kregen – now a vampire himself – to save their way of life.



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  80. Bean on June 4, 2010 at 11:48 PM

    >When a human serial killer ravages the dying supernatural world, young Michele Conner struggles for the key to murderer's motivation and identity.



  81. Kathleen Pooler on June 4, 2010 at 11:30 PM

    >A nurse shows the power of hope by sharing her faith-based journey through her son's alcoholism and her own cancer diagnosis.



  82. Erica McBeth on June 4, 2010 at 10:58 PM

    >A young woman falls in love with a modern day prince from the Middle East then struggles to fit into a tumultuous world where she doesn’t belong.



  83. Sea on June 4, 2010 at 10:56 PM

    >After being dumped by her fiance for another woman, a mortuary worker has to hunt down her missing backbone, team up with her terrifying godmother, and overcome her prejudice against gnomes, to find out once and for all if the only safe men are dead ones.



  84. Stephanie Thornton on June 4, 2010 at 10:53 PM

    >A woman finally rules Egypt as Pharaoh, but is forced to choose between happiness in this life or a chance at eternal glory.



  85. Jess on June 4, 2010 at 10:26 PM

    >When Sameen learns the truth about the coup that left her orphaned, she must overcome fear and self-doubt to restore the country her parents loved.



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    >Fifteen-year old, David Heiland, battles for his life and the life of his best friend, Charlotte, after he discovers his dead parents are alive and trapped within another world inside his own house.



  87. Clyde on June 4, 2010 at 10:17 PM

    >Memoir: Over a hundred Christian families in rural Alabama watch in horror as they are branded as a notorious mafia gang on the evening news!



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    >When a young woman dies in the arms of a young man, the two must overcome scandalous rumors, ex’s, diabetes, and a scarred heart to let their love live.



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    >Nicole was ready for a summer complete with college applications and a trip to Paris; now Eric and a secret admirer have twisted her plans and made this an unforgettable summer.



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    >A disfigured modern-day prophet must overcome his own despair in time to seal one of the seven mythical gates of hell.



  91. Diana on June 4, 2010 at 9:23 PM

    >Stuck in a partnership neither one wants, an Earth Mother and her Companion discover a pillaged farm and must now work together to defend their country from an invader with powers they don't understand.



  92. Lyndieb on June 4, 2010 at 9:12 PM

    >Super Tuesday primaries inspire a presidential candidate and his mysteriously gathered advisors to develop a campaign platform to change his candidacy from underdog to victor.



  93. Jordan on June 4, 2010 at 8:58 PM

    >A former teen superhero must choose between protecting the citizens of Tokyo or living a normal life when an invisible force begins wreaking havoc around her.



  94. Shallee on June 4, 2010 at 8:54 PM

    >When a teenage boy is drafted by his militaristic government to wield his telepathy against rebels, he must decide whether or not he’ll fight those who trained him and risk becoming one of the Disappeared.



  95. Tahlia on June 4, 2010 at 8:39 PM

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  96. Anonymous on June 4, 2010 at 8:38 PM

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    A little person and investigative journalist bent on payback for the death of her average-sized twin sister must go undercover at an abortion clinic to expose the doctor for fetal harvesting.

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    >A woman who had an abortion reconciles a birth mother with the daughter whose existence she has denied since giving her up for adoption over 20 years ago.



  98. KJ Bain on June 4, 2010 at 8:07 PM

    >Mica Jorgenson travels into a realm where things aren't as they seem when she chases a killer who appears able to kill within dreams.



  99. Lawrence on June 4, 2010 at 7:42 PM

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  100. Ryan Chin on June 4, 2010 at 7:07 PM

    >Animals are loved and lost, brothers are gone but never forgotten, and a teacher transforms his life in a Maori village.



  101. Kristin Thiel on June 4, 2010 at 7:03 PM

    >Two women, a newlywed in her thirties and the teenage embodiment of an infertility goddess, are linked through new decisions involving sexuality—and a stranger’s request that neither woman feels prepared to accept, or reject.



  102. Margaret Tanner on June 4, 2010 at 7:01 PM

    >Mistaken identity opens the door for Martin Mulvaney to revenge himself on his mortal enemy's granddaughter.



  103. joann on June 4, 2010 at 6:52 PM

    >"Providential grace allies a single mother haunted by her past, with an ex-journalist searching for his future, transforming a town fragmented by failure into a color-washed harbor for the hopeless."



  104. Matt Youngmark on June 4, 2010 at 6:04 PM

    >In an alternate present where genetics have stretched the physical boundaries of humanity, a down-and-out detective confronts the ghosts of his past and stumbles upon a corporate plot that could lead to genocide.



  105. Rebecca Cuadra George on June 4, 2010 at 5:52 PM

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    A divorced caterer/harpist and her winsome daughter-turned-detective with Down syndrome move to Amber Vines, where secrets, friendships, links to the past, and second chances blossom.



  106. cpeters on June 4, 2010 at 5:37 PM

    >The lands of Fire and Earth are dying, the Daemonkind have been released from their ages long imprisonment, the Earthen Prince has been taken… and though the Elemental Lords have chosen her to set it all to rights, Kat certainly doesn’t know it.



  107. Karen Yuan on June 4, 2010 at 5:18 PM

    >Stranded in Manhattan with early-onset Alzheimer's, a fifteen-year-old runaway must steal books for the imaginary brother of a piano prodigy in return for shelter.



  108. Gary D. Hendricks on June 4, 2010 at 4:58 PM

    >Judge Not questions our religious acceptance and moral judgment; confronted with homosexual murders, police struggling with prejudices while a non-judgmental detective tries to find the killer.



  109. Gadfly on June 4, 2010 at 4:53 PM

    >Judge Not questions our religious acceptance and moral judgment. Confronted with homosexual murders, police struggle with prejudices while a non-judgmental detective tries to find the killer.



  110. Gadfly on June 4, 2010 at 4:53 PM

    >Judge Not questions our religious acceptance and moral judgment. Confronted with homosexual murders, police struggle with prejudices while a non-judgmental detective tries to find the killer.



  111. stephenisham on June 4, 2010 at 4:27 PM

    >A cowardly miner becomes the only chance of survival for a small mining town in California.



  112. black-lavender on June 4, 2010 at 4:18 PM

    >Strange events turn a lonely collections agent into the new sheriff of a fairytale land, where she must bring a murderer to justice.

    ~ Plain Jane in Nottingham



  113. Kass on June 4, 2010 at 4:09 PM

    >A suicidal teen becomes a born-again Christian and clashes with pastors who test her faith — and her will to live.



  114. Jen M. on June 4, 2010 at 3:58 PM

    >During a dreary vacation in Scotland, 26-year-old Lou realizes that her vivid nightmares of fire and death are the clues to discovering the secrets of her ancestry.



  115. rwcopywriting on June 4, 2010 at 3:42 PM

    >Unable to move past Abel’s murder and Cain’s banishment, Eve revisits six memories to answer her heart's plea…Can Jehovah once again bring light after darkness?



  116. Anna on June 4, 2010 at 3:42 PM

    >Adult Urban Fantasy/Women's Fiction
    Working Title: Muse Walking in Memphis

    In present-day Memphis, an exiled muse must help an obstinate musician discover his calling in order to return to Mt. Olympus.



  117. Morgan L. Busse on June 4, 2010 at 3:08 PM

    >Here is my One Sentence Summary:

    A young woman discovers she's not human and possesses a terrifying gift that can save mankind.

    my email is morganlbusse@live.com

    Thanks for running this contest 🙂



  118. Callie James on June 4, 2010 at 3:08 PM

    >An ambitious teen uses a ring created from her mother’s ashes to continue her family’s battle against gods bent on reclaiming the earth.



  119. Amanda on June 4, 2010 at 2:52 PM

    >After fleeing the barbaric Yerning State Asylum, Hannah and a ragtag
    community of runaways must find a way to survive the wilderness and,
    more importantly, not get caught.



  120. Jane Steen on June 4, 2010 at 2:41 PM

    >Marcus and his family have an idyllic setting in which to face his death, but loss, danger and an evasive friendship accompany him on his final journey.



  121. Designs by JoLea on June 4, 2010 at 2:28 PM

    >A reclusive woman who is afraid of the dark faces blindness when a drug lord pursues a wounded DEA agent right through the middle of her quiet life.



  122. Hilarey on June 4, 2010 at 2:26 PM

    >Fun contest!

    A teenage stripper in Nevada is hunted by the cops she asked for help and the only escape is a man she fears more than death, her grandfather.



  123. Erynn on June 4, 2010 at 2:03 PM

    >Two CIA agents and the woman they both love are in a fight for their lives that will test their loyalty to God, country, and each other.



  124. kalincasey on June 4, 2010 at 1:47 PM

    >I accidentally double-posted, but I can't seem to delete the duplicate. 🙁



  125. S. L. Bynum on June 4, 2010 at 1:42 PM

    >Sixteen-year-old Abigail Wood tries to prevent her nightmares from coming true when they turn out to be horrific premonitions that bring tragedies upon her family and friends.



  126. kalincasey on June 4, 2010 at 1:39 PM

    >When an artist loses her creative muse, she succumbs to obsessive delusions and struggles to reclaim her sanity with her dead husband criticizing every move.



  127. kalincasey on June 4, 2010 at 1:39 PM

    >When an artist loses her creative muse, she succumbs to obsessive delusions and struggles to reclaim her sanity with her dead husband criticizing every move.



  128. Paulette on June 4, 2010 at 1:16 PM

    >A Holocaust survivor who asks only for peace and quiet and that absolutely nothing change ever again must deal with the anxiety of being alive, a wife who intends to get on with her life, and a daughter who insists on growing up.



  129. Ellen on June 4, 2010 at 1:11 PM

    >YA Dystopian:

    Darryl witnesses the mayor of NYC’s death, but when she can’t tell the police due to her own secrets, she is framed for the murder.



  130. sharon clemmons thomas on June 4, 2010 at 12:53 PM

    >Fifty-something newlyweds Bill and Sharon navigate marital passages complicated by menopausal hormone shifts and evolving midlife values on a farm in Lowcountry South Carolina.



  131. Michelle on June 4, 2010 at 12:51 PM

    >A woman able to heal anything is on the run after learning her life-giving has been used to kill and destroy millions.



  132. Kimberly Beam on June 4, 2010 at 12:24 PM

    >God speaks all the time; by tuning your ears to His voice, you are to be sure to be on His path for your life.



  133. Heidi on June 4, 2010 at 11:49 AM

    >At the start of WWII, a young woman must battle her parents for the freedom to chase her dreams, and her sister for the man she loves.



  134. ShopCartBandit on June 4, 2010 at 11:48 AM

    >A man tries to remember major prophetic knowledge of a world disaster that he believes he is supposed to thwart.



  135. Chumplet - Sandra Cormier on June 4, 2010 at 11:32 AM

    >Single parents Luke and Rebecca meet thirty years after they attended the same high school in Spain, causing Luke to rethink his tendency to run from city to city to escape the pain of losing his wife to cancer.



  136. John Betcher on June 4, 2010 at 11:28 AM

    >When computer genius, Katherine Whitson, disappears from her Minneapolis Warehouse District condo, "Beck" — a former military intelligence operative — and Beth — his CIA code-cracking wife — are taxed to their limits to save Katherine and thwart a cyber-espionage threat of global proportions.



  137. Tina Pinson on June 4, 2010 at 11:23 AM

    >A housewife learns her blood holds the antidote to save the world. The world she was born into, a hundred and fifty years in the future.



  138. Jacque on June 4, 2010 at 11:20 AM

    >Well, it’s fairy-tale/fantasy so even though I love your blog, I wouldn’t pitch it to you normally. Here it goes anyway for a shot at the contest:

    Based on Hans Christian Andersen’s The Snow Queen, Katie’s attempted suicide transports her to a realm of agonizing limbo where she must travel past four seasonal fairies, physical manifestations of her own tormented heart, to rescue a love she once pushed away before they are both forever trapped.



  139. Heather Kelly on June 4, 2010 at 11:19 AM

    >When a boy has no one left to turn to, and a star just won't accept her place in the universe, two worlds collide with a big bang.



  140. Paula Harrington on June 4, 2010 at 11:11 AM

    >A grief stricken celebrity sees life for the first time from a Christian’s perspective thanks to a new friend who is no stranger to tragedy himself.



  141. Bev Bender on June 4, 2010 at 11:07 AM

    >A young father turns to online pornography when depression grips his wife following childbirth and he begins a struggle with God, alcohol, porn and illicit sex but God will not let him go.



  142. Tina Pinson on June 4, 2010 at 11:03 AM

    >Adam was ready to live without Grace, until he lost her. He thought he didn’t deserve grace then it found him.



  143. frank1569 on June 4, 2010 at 10:57 AM

    >ZEA

    After mild-mannered VP of Human Resources BOB is accidentally exposed to The Corporation’s secret, he’s promoted against his will by his nefarious CEO mentor to VP of ZR for Zindy Ehrlich & Associates, or ZEA, ‘The next level of office services in-sourcing.’ In-house, however, ZEA stands for something else entirely:

    The Zombie Employment Agency.



  144. Kemari Howell on June 4, 2010 at 10:54 AM

    >When 12-year-old Fern found her genie, she'd made two of three wishes that had catastrophic consequences, and now that she is an adult, she must find a way to wish her last wish, to have her genie's love, without adverse results.



  145. cttiger on June 4, 2010 at 10:34 AM

    >Caterer Kensing Delaney struggles to convince police that her cinnamon torte didn't poison the dead Fairfield County socialite, but the victim's past as a black market baby broker, her disgruntled stepchildren and recently paroled ex-husband all add spice to Kensing's search for the truth.



  146. Josin L. McQuein on June 4, 2010 at 10:32 AM

    >Treat it like a logline and your life will be easier. I wrote this one way back when the concept was a screenplay instead of a WIP:

    A blind physics professor is haunted by a woman who swears he's destined to murder her in three days – unless she kills him first.



  147. Julie Weathers on June 4, 2010 at 10:31 AM

    >Gentyl struggles to stop a civil war between her parents' people, but a pirate, demon lord and senile wizard all have other plans for her.



  148. Kat Harris on June 4, 2010 at 9:58 AM

    >When her Prince Charming dies, a modern-day Cinderella with post-traumatic stress must return home to make peace with the estranged father in whose footsteps she has followed.



  149. Everyday Becky on June 4, 2010 at 8:58 AM

    >A small Eastern Washington town becomes the backdrop of unseen warfare when the high school’s star quarterback confronts a local cult to save his father’s life, and the girl he wants to hate battles for his heart.



  150. Arthur Smith on June 4, 2010 at 8:36 AM

    >Nolen's mother is dead and he's in a country he knows nothing about surrounded by people searching for a rumored two thousand year old artifact that could control time and history.



  151. Andrew Hill on June 4, 2010 at 8:26 AM

    >One sentence pitch for "The Kingdom of Urartu" by Andrew Hill:

    "An underground Soviet faction will stop at nothing to see one of Christianity’s greatest treasures destroyed and only archaeologist Russell Grant stands in their way."



  152. Beth on June 4, 2010 at 7:58 AM

    >A boy fights time-looting pirates while keeping Hitler's WWII conquest from succeeding and finding a way to save his army medic dad, originally killed in the Persian Gulf War.



  153. Kelly Freestone on June 4, 2010 at 7:50 AM

    >In an America shaped by THE DISEASED CHILD ABORTION ACT, Anna must fight to protect her own unborn child from the forceful hand of the government she so adamantly helped create.



  154. Rudywg on June 4, 2010 at 5:41 AM

    >A widowed mom faces ultimate surrender and trust when she realizes God is calling her 16-year-old, non-hiker son to hike the Appalachian Trail. . . alone.



  155. Crimey on June 4, 2010 at 4:35 AM

    >Ninety-five percent of the world’s population perishes in the worst pandemic since the Black Plague and Valentina’s about to find out that surviving means enduring the wrath of a prophet determined to see her dead.



  156. Lucy on June 4, 2010 at 2:55 AM

    >A KGB Colonel betrays one friend too many, and tries to make things right by changing sides. Too bad treason isn't enough.



  157. Trish Kahle on June 4, 2010 at 1:13 AM

    >When a young Eastern European refugee appears at his parish's shelter, Ngoma must question his place in a world filled with death, poverty, and oppression and he must ask himself if faith alone can guide him.



  158. Sudam on June 4, 2010 at 1:04 AM

    >Akash had to live with his unmarried life, taunting and loneliness and when he could not marry till 43, succumbed to death due to drinking and smoking.

    Thanks



  159. Ryan and Melanie on June 4, 2010 at 12:18 AM

    >A boy coming of age during India’s violent partition attempts to guard the increasingly fragile bond with his sister in the face of separation, a hostile boarding school environment, romantic pursuits, and family tragedy.



  160. J.R. Beasley on June 3, 2010 at 11:04 PM

    >Zeke Thorsby, an ex-military operative, investigates a suspicious congressional bill and discovers that it's part of a secret society's diabolical agenda to alter America and the world.



  161. Space Coast Conservative [dot]com on June 3, 2010 at 10:40 PM

    >In a household of nine near-the-edge family members — eight cousins and Grandpa, Dorsel Udell Doe, who just returned from the asylum — how do they cope after Marvis Ken Jones, accidentally kills family favorite, Arsnal Sigmund Smith?



  162. Michelle Massaro on June 3, 2010 at 10:37 PM

    >When a one-night stand results in pregnancy, newly repentant John Douglas must risk losing the woman he loves to surrender all for Christ.



  163. Jil on June 3, 2010 at 10:25 PM

    >When a young woman arrives to help her reclusive great grandmother in Swale Hall on the edge of the Yorkshire moors, she becomes enmeshed in the old woman's imaginary world and must find the cause of her madness to save them both.



  164. Phoebe on June 3, 2010 at 10:18 PM

    >Sixteen-year-old Gwen runs away with two Forest Creatures, Erhent and Coyote, to Scotland, where she must learn to fend off monsters if she’s going to survive a plot to take over the Highlands.



  165. Steve on June 3, 2010 at 10:16 PM

    >An aspiring teen rock musician confronts the challenges of discovering and maintaining her individuality – supported by like-minded friends – against the pressures of mindless social conformity.



  166. heatherstarnes on June 3, 2010 at 9:46 PM

    >When an invitation to Paris Fashion Week’s After Party arrives in her inbox, a college student vows to find a required “industry appropriate” date but must salvage her internship before the party after her “date prospects” are implicated in a career killing FBI investigation.



  167. Peggy on June 3, 2010 at 8:56 PM

    >A young man believes he has ended three unplanned pregnancies, but the babies survive and re-enter his life when he needs a hero, a donor, and an alibi.



  168. James Ashman on June 3, 2010 at 7:46 PM

    >Va'il, an optimistic half-human boy, adventures with his friends as they discover secrets, plots, and fend off predjudice in a fantastic creature-filled world.



  169. PicardyRose on June 3, 2010 at 7:30 PM

    >An upper-class woman in World War I London forced to support herself as a nurse struggles to fit into her new working-class surroundings while concealing her relationship with the captain of a battalion of vampire soldiers.



  170. Gwenn Brown on June 3, 2010 at 7:23 PM

    >It’s been 6 years since Gabrielle’s conversion, but Saturday morning the phone rings, interrupts her process, and initiates her plunge into an abyss of familiarity.



  171. justajo on June 3, 2010 at 7:19 PM

    >Nine year-old learning disabled Richard stumbles upon a burglary investigation of wealthy Old Man Hawkins' home and to the disbelief of everyone, especially police Lt. Columbine, solves the mystery.



  172. Keylocke on June 3, 2010 at 5:45 PM

    >Dismantling Spider Webs

    The extramarital affair with her pastor abruptly ends when her husband dies, leaving Lorelei to face a crumbling house, the small town’s scorn and an abused boy—alone.



  173. yeggy's tropical yard on June 3, 2010 at 5:30 PM

    >When teenage girl Shannon is kidnapped and transported to the future, yet pre industrial, world of N’arth she must masquerade as the unpopular Princess Rhea and pretend to follow the wizard Nuselmir’s agenda so that, once she knows how, she can return to Earth and alert its people of their impending doom. © Val Clark



  174. Niki Schoenfeldt on June 3, 2010 at 4:44 PM

    >His Dad is in jail, his mother is an alcoholic and his little brother is a pint-sized goth freak. Life ain't easy for Talon Cooey, so when Dad calls from prison looking for another hand-out to save his worthless life, what's a guy to do?

    BLOOD ON MY HANDS



  175. patriarch on June 3, 2010 at 4:35 PM

    >A gifted violinist loses his bow hand in the Civil War, and almost loses his soul, until “the enemy” helps him overcome his disability.



  176. Gayle on June 3, 2010 at 4:10 PM

    >In turn-of-the-century Paris, a young American artist and a French detective search desperately among Satanists, anarchists, decadent poets, and sadistic doctors to find the illusive murderer who believes he’s the reincarnation of France’s most evil serial killer.



  177. Davalynn Spencer on June 3, 2010 at 4:09 PM

    >1. In their struggle to survive a boring summer, two boys suddenly find themselves fighting for their lives when a California earthquake collapses their underground hiding place.



  178. Melissa K Norris on June 3, 2010 at 4:00 PM

    >Emmaline James sneaks onto a California gold field bound cattle drive to escape an arranged marriage to a dangerous man, but she may be trading one danger for another.



  179. Rebecca LuElla Miller on June 3, 2010 at 3:54 PM

    >When washed-up basketball player Jim Thompson falls into a parallel world, he must stop searching for the way home and trust his new friends in order to escape the enemy soldiers hunting him.



  180. Dara on June 3, 2010 at 3:07 PM

    >In 1890s Japan, a biracial young woman must live in hiding from a powerful terrorist organization while she searches for acceptance in a society bound by tradition.



  181. Brandi Schmidt on June 3, 2010 at 3:07 PM

    >When God’s cupid happens to be a girl who’s never loved, she must discover her power to fuse the sparks before the darkness devours them all.

    Brandi



  182. Tchann on June 3, 2010 at 3:05 PM

    >Suddenly zapped to a fantasy world, a retail employee sets out with a journeying farmer and a prophesied princess in order to find the wizard who can save their country…and hopefully send her back home.



  183. Cindy on June 3, 2010 at 3:05 PM

    >Guitar lessons with the deputy are only the beginning when a shy reporter is assigned to take her past advice, and report on it for her column.



  184. Rick Boyne on June 3, 2010 at 2:43 PM

    >Here's my entry for "Jackpot!" (working title)

    Owen Rigsby won $142 million in the lottery plunging him into a life of greed, lust, revenge and redemption.



  185. Andie Pandie on June 3, 2010 at 2:41 PM

    >A Fish Without a Bicycle is a tale of two cities—Berkeley and Porterville—in which a teen, hell-bent to choreograph a Moby Dick modern dance masterpiece, wanders off course when she falls in love with a purity-ring wearing eco-warrior.



  186. Melinda Evaul on June 3, 2010 at 2:34 PM

    >A modern day Beauty and the Beast discover love in their fifties when a disfigured carpenter becomes a long-term guest at Mosey Inn in a western-style tourist town.



  187. For Your Eyes Only on June 3, 2010 at 2:33 PM

    >Ancient law states a thousand year thirst if the vengeful vampire has the urge to take submission from the blood tie ancestor of an unforgotten lover.



  188. Andie Pandie on June 3, 2010 at 2:14 PM

    >A Bible belt of California teen, hell-bent to choreograph a Moby Dick modern dance masterpiece, is blown off course by the true love of a purity-ring wearing eco-warrior.



  189. angus on June 3, 2010 at 1:54 PM

    >In the wake of a crushing divorce, I struggle to understand the cause of my marital failure, discovering the most common mistakes people make that sabotage relationships and the role our hearts play in navigating our journey in the search for love.



  190. Jeanne Lyet Gassman on June 3, 2010 at 1:25 PM

    >In first century Palestine, a troubled caravan driver plots to assassinate the one man who could expose his criminal past: a prophet named Jesus of Nazareth.



  191. CJ Parker on June 3, 2010 at 1:24 PM

    >Tabatha Gray, psychiatrist and necromancer returns home to face finding a child killer, solving a twenty-year-old murder and a battle against an organization wanting her dead.



  192. Anita Agers-Brooks on June 3, 2010 at 1:19 PM

    >Irreplaceable by Anita Agers-Brooks

    Today’s fearful employees, raised to look out for number one, battle to keep their jobs while businesses lay off, move overseas, and close.



  193. Linda Howell Betz on June 3, 2010 at 1:10 PM

    >Freefall by Linda Betz
    In 1947 Kansas City, Kansas, Estelle Prebilica, the daughter of devout Croatian immigrants, justifies her forbidden romance and little white lies, until she embarks on a terrifying journey through the world of drugs, prostitution, and murder.



  194. Richard Waskiewicz on June 3, 2010 at 1:07 PM

    >Samuel, a Royal Guard trainee, chooses between loyalty and revenge when he rescues the countess responsible for his father’s murder.



  195. Marissa Farrar on June 3, 2010 at 1:06 PM

    >Dive into the Underlife, where one man's fight to save his son's life takes him into the terrifying world of London's underground homeless, and then on to another world completely.



  196. C. Michael Fontes on June 3, 2010 at 1:05 PM

    >When a catastrophic event disables all forms of electricity in the United States, an Ex Black Ops NY State Trooper watches his son die, then must choose between duty, friendship, and his wife in a perilous race against technology, time and society.



  197. suz on June 3, 2010 at 1:03 PM

    >The Adventures of Puckatoo – Early Middle Grade

    During a sailing adventure to search for their missing parents, Puckatoo, a Jack Russell Terrier, saves her boys from a monster and scheming island chief.



  198. Lynn Dean on June 3, 2010 at 1:02 PM

    >A war-weary spinster heads west to escape her grief and runs headlong into he man who caused it.



  199. Jolene on June 3, 2010 at 1:00 PM

    >A small town girl is set up by her best friend and falls for a famous musician which throws her repeated attempts at a carefully planned life into chaos.



  200. Melissa Eiselein on June 3, 2010 at 12:55 PM

    >April Rose cannot ignore a wrong that needs righting—especially when an innocent man is arrested for murder and the evidence against him is a photo she snapped.



  201. Jesse on June 3, 2010 at 12:44 PM

    >After being mugged and shot at, Thom has to get away from kidnappers who've taken him to the most dangerous mountain in New Hampshire, Wilde Mountain.



  202. This Is The Knew Me on June 3, 2010 at 12:33 PM

    >Sixteen year old Allaura Fairchild is the most powerful magical being to ever walk the face of the earth, but her powers go on the fritz when she's betrayed by someone in her inner circle and she must find a way to master her magic before she can save the ones she loves from the fairies who murdered her mother.



  203. J9Talley on June 3, 2010 at 12:25 PM

    >At 21, Janine was confronted with an irreclaimable choice; abandon her interracial love affair with NFL star, Darryl Talley, or face disownment by her wealthy, politically connected family.



  204. Z One on June 3, 2010 at 12:20 PM

    >Felix Ravenna: A Mosaic

    Although he's risen to a position of great power, Argolicus maintains his idealistic attitude. His refusal to compromise his ideals has earned him numerous enemies who consider him a dangerous presence in Theoderic's Ravenna.



  205. Stella Watson on June 3, 2010 at 12:17 PM

    >No Wings Attached
    What if an undercover angel appears and turns your life upside down?



  206. Davey on June 3, 2010 at 11:55 AM

    >In the Amazon jungle, evil spirits and malevolent shamans need to be kept in check, and when the vulnerable Wilo tribe realize their witchdoctors are not up to the task, they seek help from a surprising source.



  207. Jerry Godsey on June 3, 2010 at 11:44 AM

    >Jerry Godsey "The View From the Pew"

    A collection of stories and observations that reveal what happens when a pastor, crime scene investigator and all around round guy looks at Christianity and life in general.



  208. Holly on June 3, 2010 at 11:40 AM

    >Faced with saving herself or humanity, an unrelenting teenager survives a virluent epidemic only to face conscription into the government's plan for a better future–The Immunity Project–aka: a human breeding program.



  209. Wendy Delfosse on June 3, 2010 at 11:28 AM

    >When her best friend reinvents herself, Shawna is exposed to drugs and depression and must decide if she'll try to help or walk away.



  210. Charity on June 3, 2010 at 11:20 AM

    >Flames devoured her beauty and mocked her life now Charity must learn to rise above her scars in a world that demands perfection.



  211. Loree H on June 3, 2010 at 10:37 AM

    >In 1863, a young woman, unwed and with child, is forced from her home and into the heart of a country at war as she struggles with the hope of keeping her baby.



  212. Barbara on June 3, 2010 at 10:04 AM

    >After a dimensional disaster, a blind educator and her former lover, a police detective, race to stop a demon invasion and the ensuing human conquest.



  213. Rebecca G. on June 3, 2010 at 9:58 AM

    >An Iowa farm girl who explores cemeteries, undergoes a personal renaissance through the helpful wisdom of a Jamaican ghost angel.



  214. Rebecca G. on June 3, 2010 at 9:58 AM

    >An Iowa farm girl who explores cemeteries, undergoes a personal renaissance through the helpful wisdom of a Jamaican ghost angel.



  215. Lauren Scanlan on June 3, 2010 at 9:36 AM

    >A noblewoman from a race of plant-people dependent on the moon to live must solve the mystery of the moon’s impending disappearance to save her people and her world.



  216. Dianne E. Butts on June 3, 2010 at 9:20 AM

    >Thanks for this very helpful information, Rachelle. I've printed it off AND saved it in my fiction-writing file in Word. This will help me do this for all my works in progress.



  217. Craig on June 3, 2010 at 9:17 AM

    >A lonely, young girl finds tyranny, betrayal, and her little brother in an ancient city a mile beneath her grandfather’s farm.



  218. Martha Miller on June 3, 2010 at 9:14 AM

    >When 18 year-old Sparrow Thibault is struck by lightning and almost dies, she awakens in the hospital one morning hearing a disembodied voice telling her she is pregnant with the next Messiah.



  219. Martha Miller on June 3, 2010 at 9:14 AM

    >When 18 year-old Sparrow Thibault is struck by lightning and almost dies, she awakens in the hospital one morning hearing a disembodied voice telling her she is pregnant with the next Messiah.



  220. Turbo on June 3, 2010 at 9:04 AM

    >An aging superhero set and his team fight against a coalition of feuding oligarchs that rule a city built amidst the bones of a fallen titan.



  221. February Grace on June 3, 2010 at 8:53 AM

    >A coffee house manager who aspires to write realizes he's in love with his favorite regular customer- half an hour before the scheduled start of her wedding.



  222. Aurora on June 3, 2010 at 8:53 AM

    >In 1890's England, a shy, intellectual Anglican priest and his agnostic militant suffragette cousin battle their attraction to each other and their opposing ambitions.



  223. Ralene on June 3, 2010 at 8:41 AM

    >Dividing Spirits by Ralene Burke

    A resourceful amnesiac’s new gift thrusts her into the spiritual realm to destroy a demon on a mission to obliterate Christianity using 21st century technology.



  224. Krista Phillips on June 3, 2010 at 8:35 AM

    >WOW! You have some great pitches to choose from!

    Here is mine from my current WIP:

    Her embarrassment aired eight months ago, but when her past shows up at the door, bringing the reality-TV media back with him, this down-home girl fights to keep control of her life and her heart.



  225. Cora Allen on June 3, 2010 at 8:34 AM

    >When the man she tricked into being a father moves to town a former teacher must win his trust to help her own son overcome his reading disability.



  226. C. Bell on June 3, 2010 at 7:59 AM

    >When chilling text messages from an unknown sender pull Judge Haley Mabry from a black tie soirée back to her home, she discovers her daughter has been kidnapped by an escaped convict; regrettably, Haley turns to the only person who can help her find Macy…her ex, Agent Travis Frost.



  227. loishudson on June 3, 2010 at 7:57 AM

    >The Tenth Month by Lois Hudson

    Guilt-ridden inventor of artificial womb faces adulation and vilification, seeks answers to chaos as worldwide birthrate plunges to zero when God closes the womb.



  228. Angela Folds Fox on June 3, 2010 at 7:54 AM

    >Hidden within St. Augustine's Old City Gate, Michael Brannen discovers a journalistic lead that will save his magazine; but breaking the story will break the heart of the woman who has captured his.



  229. Jannette Johnson on June 3, 2010 at 7:28 AM

    >This is for my urban fantasy; The Saints of Belvedere Road.

    When the oldest of Amelia Saint’s children is partially transformed into a demon, her life becomes a living nightmare as she races against time to save her child.



  230. Bittersweet Fountain on June 3, 2010 at 6:32 AM

    >A twelve-year-old former street urchin struggling with her abandonment must learn to use her "demon"-given powers to save the life of the man who took her off the streets or else end up without a family once more.



  231. Patricia Nesbitt on June 3, 2010 at 6:31 AM

    >Over the course of her fifth grade year in 1960, PATSY faces life-challenges through her own voice, faithfully recorded in a red journal, and forges a deep connection between writing poetry and her ability to persevere through her problems.



  232. Kellie Bonifield on June 3, 2010 at 6:15 AM

    >Suburban housewife, Liz Murdock, risks her family’s safety—and her marriage—when she trades in her twinset for a siren-red dress and recruitment as a domestic agent by sexy spy, Bill Sooner.



  233. tessaquin on June 3, 2010 at 6:15 AM

    >Stuck in a mystical world, Eva is forced to pick a side in a deadly battle between good and evil to get home.

    (YA fantasy/adventure)



  234. Heidi Britz on June 3, 2010 at 5:57 AM

    >I decided to play 20 questions with God when my life fell apart, and His unexpected answers took me around the world and home again.



  235. Kimberly Kincaid on June 3, 2010 at 5:44 AM

    >For my contemporary romance novel,14 Ocean Avenue

    There are two things at the top of Jolie Parker's "never going to happen" list. Conquering her fear of the ocean is one of them. Falling in love again is the other.



  236. Sakhi on June 3, 2010 at 4:27 AM

    >My WIP:

    What does a girl who doesn't believe in fantasy do when a coin thrown into a magical fountain reveals to her a world of vampires, shapeshifters and more?



  237. xdpaul on June 3, 2010 at 2:49 AM

    >The aborted come back angry, and the only one with a shot at stopping them is a rural cop with a secret identity.



  238. Dee White on June 3, 2010 at 1:21 AM

    >When 15yo Matt receives a letter from his 'dead' mother, he discovers that finding out the truth can be worse than not knowing.



  239. Jill Williamson on June 3, 2010 at 12:49 AM

    >A girl discovers her geneticist father is covering up multiple secrets, all of which are named Jason.



  240. Sandie Hudson on June 3, 2010 at 12:38 AM

    >Lady Josephine Mounthall's desire to take Duke Chesterfield as her lover over marriage, risks the gossip of polite society. Is she risking more? Her heart.



  241. Leanne on June 3, 2010 at 12:37 AM

    >An old widow's quest for answers to her missionary daughter's disappearance in Idi Amin's Uganda are revealed on Christmas Day 19 years later.



  242. Laura on June 3, 2010 at 12:10 AM

    >Meet Emily by Laura Albright

    When Emily runs into her first love years after they’ve lost touch, she watches her world shift as she is forced to question her pragmatic ideals and wonders if there are no accidents.



  243. ninidee on June 3, 2010 at 12:08 AM

    >Sorry, I did not purposely submit that twice. There was a glitch. 🙂



  244. ninidee on June 3, 2010 at 12:08 AM

    >Sorry, I did not purposely submit that twice. There was a glitch. 🙂



  245. ninidee on June 3, 2010 at 12:08 AM

    >A fifteen-year-old trouble finding boy questioning the disappearance of his mother learns that graveyards are full of secrets, some of which can’t stay buried.



  246. ninidee on June 3, 2010 at 12:08 AM

    >A fifteen-year-old trouble finding boy questioning the disappearance of his mother learns that graveyards are full of secrets, some of which can’t stay buried.



  247. Shelly Wutke on June 2, 2010 at 11:54 PM

    >A young mother decides to lay down her life on rain soaked train tracks, setting in motion a battle for her sanity, her identity, and her family, as they struggle to find a way to make her whole again.



  248. Lilangel on June 2, 2010 at 11:39 PM

    >Kagayaki, a man who ceaselessly loved, saved Clarence, a man he saw kill five people in Tokyo. Now Kagayaki's been murdered and Clarence knows why.



  249. Elizabeth Briggs on June 2, 2010 at 11:37 PM

    >When the chosen one dies, her geeky double from our world must pretend to be her to stop an empire from conquering the multiverse – and Earth is its next target.



  250. Bill on June 2, 2010 at 11:20 PM

    >An investment banker must overcome a corrupt cabal to win the freedom of his kidnapped wife and child and prevent a world-wide economic collapse.



  251. Mechelle Fogelsong on June 2, 2010 at 11:01 PM

    >When Brisa finds herself pregnant and unwed, her old-school Latino father forces her to marry a mysterious stranger whose motives for marriage elude her.

    mfogelsong(at)buhlschools(dot)org



  252. --Deb on June 2, 2010 at 10:50 PM

    >Oh, fun. Here's mine:

    Sara Morgan survived the Titanic disaster, but now she faces an even worse ordeal—convincing her skeptical friends and family that a grieving widow can raise a ten-year old orphan, one who has inherited a fortune and may not need her help after all.



  253. Carolyn on June 2, 2010 at 10:38 PM

    >Memoir: A woman with a passion for Paris overcomes emotional and geographic obstacles to journey there at critical turning points, causing the City of Light to become irrevocably intertwined with her family, career, and intimate relationships.



  254. Jessica Peter on June 2, 2010 at 10:31 PM

    >A sixteen-year-old girl remembers something she shouldn’t be able to and when it brings the focus of the Wild Hunt down on her, she must fight to keep her life – and the lives of those around her.



  255. Andrea McLaren on June 2, 2010 at 10:20 PM

    >When the enemy strikes, Aylilya is forced from the euphoria known as her life, and with the help of Nathriel, sets out to regain her stolen kingdom and life.



  256. Remo on June 2, 2010 at 10:16 PM

    >An American couple embraces West Indian superstitions and Islamic mysticism in the battle to save the life of the newborn they have adopted from British Guyana.



  257. Kathy Floyd on June 2, 2010 at 10:12 PM

    >"I DIED LAUGHING: Lessons Learned From a Life Lived Around Death"
    Although you might not expect to find mirth around the mortuary, this author's stories of growing up in a family of undertakers demonstrate that there can be fun around the funeral home and a few profound points to be gathered as well.



  258. KC Frantzen on June 2, 2010 at 10:02 PM

    >An imaginative young Schnauzer escapes abuse through adoption into the country home of a grouchy Labrador, and becomes a K9 spy. (Middle Grade Adventure)

    Thank you. Great to read all the entries so far! What fun! 🙂



  259. hollywoodclown on June 2, 2010 at 9:56 PM

    >An Inside Look At The Highly Competitive and Political World Of Children’s Birthday Parties In Los Angeles.



  260. Alli on June 2, 2010 at 9:55 PM

    >To end the destructive powers of an Incan artifact, Tess Garibaldi must discover if her ex-husband or new flame is a reincarnation of the lover she lost in a past life.



  261. Tiffany on June 2, 2010 at 9:42 PM

    >After her bitter heart begins to soften only to be broken once again, a college student must learn what love really means by discovering the One who created it in the first place.



  262. Joel Q on June 2, 2010 at 9:28 PM

    >Color of Gothic
    Spec Christian Fiction/horror

    Bounty hunter, Jonathan Blair, tracks a member of his former gang to a Rocky Mountain coal-mining town as it succumbs to an assault by demons, masquerading as vampires.

    (Your brain is going to get fuzzy looking at all these.)



  263. Rob on June 2, 2010 at 9:26 PM

    >A single father of two teens must prove his son innocent of his daughter's murder.



  264. Rinda Hahn on June 2, 2010 at 9:22 PM

    >Unspeakable Journey by Rinda Hahn Isabella is stolen from her perfect life and forced to become a foreign prince’s wife, and surviving may cost her everything she loves.



  265. Alli on June 2, 2010 at 9:16 PM

    >To end the destructive powers of an Incan artifact, Tess Garibaldi must discover if her ex-husband or new flame is a reincarnation of the lover she lost in a past life.



  266. Alleged Author on June 2, 2010 at 9:14 PM

    >Life's not all it's cracked up to be when you're eggheads, and a run-in with the school bully is going to show the Nerd Herd just how true this statement is.



  267. Brittany on June 2, 2010 at 9:09 PM

    >When a high school freshman gets thrown onto another planet and finds out that she’s supposed to be the elf savior of a magic race, she must save herself and her new family and keep them from the wrath of the immortal king Acho, no matter the cost.



  268. Stephanie on June 2, 2010 at 9:06 PM

    >When Isabelle's husband is murdered only one man can keep her from becoming the killer's next target—the assassin she once loved and cruelly betrayed.



  269. Aimee LS on June 2, 2010 at 9:00 PM

    >Dani Hayes uncovers a supernatural war, hidden since creation, and realizes she must lead the world to the truth, even if it kills her – or the man she loves.



  270. Kathy Harris on June 2, 2010 at 8:56 PM

    >A brain aneurism leaves a Christian entertainer’s wife on the brink of eternity, and guilt from the past threatens to push her over the edge.



  271. Kristin T. (@kt_writes) on June 2, 2010 at 8:54 PM

    >A woman stuck in a cornfield town is dismayed by the turns her life has taken, until she learns to embrace true love, friendships with exes, the complexity of a blended family, and a God who can love a not-so-good-girl.



  272. Gary J. Borgstede on June 2, 2010 at 8:51 PM

    >Make It Happen Team Values create a culture of empowerment that reaches people and unleashes their extraordinary God-given potential to make a difference in life, one person, one encounter at a time.

    The Make It Happen Journey by Gary J. Borgstede



  273. John on June 2, 2010 at 8:42 PM

    >Vic Anderson must protect his wife Emily from the billionaire sociopath intent on destroying her, and seducing Vic for herself.



  274. clairegillian on June 2, 2010 at 8:21 PM

    >A cynical vampire must groom his lovely but inept creation to live independently or she'll be staked, except she's a one of a kind hybrid.



  275. trishaleighkc on June 2, 2010 at 8:09 PM

    >Seventeen-year-old Althea must find the courage to stop hiding and delve into her mysterious past if she's to survive the upcoming interrogations with the brutal Wardens and unlock the secret potential of her unusual powers.



  276. Tonya on June 2, 2010 at 7:57 PM

    >The OG Man by Tonya Rene

    In beautiful Appalachia, a well-loved teacher falls in love with the enemy,who has come home to die, and changes everything.



  277. W.J. Howard on June 2, 2010 at 7:56 PM

    >When FBI Agent William Knox is sent to Denver to investigate a rash of missing persons, he meets indentured vampire, Regina Todd, and together they unravel a dark maze of crime syndicates, secret blood running,
    and humans turning on their own kind.



  278. Peppi Vecchio on June 2, 2010 at 7:54 PM

    >A young genetic scientist discovers the holy grail of DNA science and is hunted by a Global Empire.



  279. Chris Kraft on June 2, 2010 at 7:44 PM

    >When the wallflower daughter of an influential Christian family brings her social-climbing college roommate home for a visit, disaster ensues when the roommate ends up marrying into the family, wreaking havoc on the nominal faith of the family, especially their ability to forgive when the girl sincerely repents.



  280. patriciazell on June 2, 2010 at 7:41 PM

    >Because Christ obliterated the dividing wall between God and human beings, we have the power to understand and manifest God's absolute love in our world.



  281. Chris Kraft on June 2, 2010 at 7:36 PM

    >Sibling rivalry between sisters leads to a tragic car accident that leaves one sister's charmed life forever altered by a brain injury, and the other ostracized from their bohemian Irish-American family.



  282. Shannon Dittemore on June 2, 2010 at 7:26 PM

    >When Jake gives Chase his guardian angel's halo, neither expect it to show them the Celestial Realm—a realm seen only by angels and their kind—nor do they expect to unravel a mystery including a friend's murder, the abduction of a child, and a diplomat involved in the child slave trade.



  283. Lisa K. on June 2, 2010 at 7:18 PM

    >When his estranged wife promises their dying daughter to The Program, a technology that channels souls into clean and limitless power, beloved singer, Sheppard Lorren, must travel through a changed world to stop a technology out of control.



  284. Heidi Mannan on June 2, 2010 at 7:04 PM

    >When a young woman's infiltration into a secret society comes to light, she must choose between committing her worst sin or her life.



  285. Heidi Mannan on June 2, 2010 at 7:03 PM

    >When a young woman's infiltration into a secret society comes to light, she must choose between committing her worst sin or her life.



  286. Heidi Mannan on June 2, 2010 at 7:03 PM

    >When a young woman's infiltration into a secret society comes to light, she must choose between committing her worst sin or her life.



  287. Monotreme on June 2, 2010 at 6:38 PM

    >An escapted laboratory virus gives Jennifer Blake brains but takes away her beauty — and Sylvie Bercu is the only researcher who can set things right.



  288. Camille Eide on June 2, 2010 at 6:37 PM

    >A bitter young widower's second chance at love means marrying a dying woman.



  289. Care on June 2, 2010 at 6:30 PM

    >A vulnerable woman caught in the cross hairs of her predatory pastor must learn how to outsmart his dark ways,in order to survive.



  290. Kelly Bryson on June 2, 2010 at 6:29 PM

    >A young woman, kidnapped back to Eden when she was a child, has returned to the fallen world. When she finds love with the FBI agent investigating the cult that stole her, she must decide between an immortal, single life in Eden and the chance for true love in the fallen world.



  291. John on June 2, 2010 at 6:04 PM

    >When twelve year old Bobby Wright is mistaken for the child named in an ancient prophecy, he embarks on a dangerous quest eerily similar to that of the hero in his favorite fantasy novel.



  292. Nicole MacDonald on June 2, 2010 at 5:44 PM

    >BIRTHRIGHT THE ARRIVAL, four independent, sassy friends land themselves on another planet where magick and myth are norm and the ultimate weapons to end an eons old war lays in their hands.



  293. Lynn Mitchell on June 2, 2010 at 5:43 PM

    >A teenage girl grieves her best friend’s suicide as she battles self-esteem issues caused by her estranged father.



  294. Chantal on June 2, 2010 at 5:41 PM

    >When Calista wakes to find her servants gone and her money drained, she must balance her need to keep her family well and a town that expects her to act like the wealthy lady she once was, all the while renting the empty rooms in her manor to handsome Nathan and his mute younger brother.



  295. Kate C Neal on June 2, 2010 at 5:41 PM

    >Emilie moves into her famous friend's LA guesthouse with a plan to make over her stagnant life in time for her high school reunion, but things go awry when she becomes the tabloids' favorite new victim.



  296. Stacy on June 2, 2010 at 5:37 PM

    >With the aid of her strong willed future self, battered Anna fights for her life to escape the wrath of her abusive boyfriend. "Anna, Wake Up!"



  297. REG on June 2, 2010 at 5:21 PM

    >Randi Green and former NSA agent, Kai Hemming fight to prove their innocence and find her husband’s killer through changing beliefs and biotechnology.



  298. Cynthia Schuerr on June 2, 2010 at 5:06 PM

    >During the Depression Era, a twelve year old Alicia grows into the responsibility of caring for her siblings when Father is forcibly taken away from them.



  299. anna black on June 2, 2010 at 5:05 PM

    >WITCH-ed

    After receiving magical powers from a dying woman, Becca must now face the murderer who has set his sights on her new found powers.



  300. Becca Whitham on June 2, 2010 at 5:01 PM

    >Nora fled home and lied to establish and new life in frontier Wyoming, but when an angry bull and kidnapping expose the truth, her reluctant husband must decide if she’s worth reclaiming.



  301. Cson on June 2, 2010 at 4:55 PM

    >Led by a genetically modified demon, legions of monsters are recreating the behemoth of legends to rid the earth of lesser beings.



  302. Shelli on June 2, 2010 at 4:47 PM

    >Jane, the perfect wife and mother, receives an anonymous note from a stranger that leads her on a wild adventure that makes her question if perfection is what she really wants after all.



  303. Psuedo Nym on June 2, 2010 at 4:42 PM

    >As seventeen-year-old Jade's life spins out of control, the wise words of a coffeehouse owner and the philosophies of a dying child soften her heart enough to realize the God that she thought had abandoned her was really hard at work in her life all along.



  304. Rita Lorraine on June 2, 2010 at 4:30 PM

    >A seven-year-old orphan joins the colored troops near Chattanooga, survives imprisonment in Dalton, and drums on the front lines in the Battle of Nashville.



  305. Diana Symons on June 2, 2010 at 4:26 PM

    >When Tam dismisses culural fear of the great temple Premana-Natan, he unknowingly challenges the rule of the Regent and unleashes a wave of death.



  306. Daryl Sedore on June 2, 2010 at 4:23 PM

    >A victim of trichotillomania, Sarah Roberts is an Automatic Writer who has been thwarting kidnappings and saving lives against her will.



  307. Messy mommy on June 2, 2010 at 4:05 PM

    >After they are sucked into a video game, can siblings, Danny and Emily, stop fighting to discover treasure or will they be stuck forever?



  308. Jennifer AlLee on June 2, 2010 at 4:00 PM

    >When a car accident leaves her stranded in a bizarre roadside diner, a trivia expert must answer the ultimate question… life or death?



  309. Bobbi Carducci on June 2, 2010 at 3:54 PM

    >When her ill father-in-law moves in after the death of his wife Bobbi quits her job to care for him, unaware that he’s schizophrenic and off his medication.



  310. Kat Zhang on June 2, 2010 at 3:28 PM

    >In a world where it is the norm for two souls to be born in one body–one with total control of the limbs, the other nothing but a paralyzed voice–Eva struggles for command of her own hands and feet.



  311. Glenn Sasscer on June 2, 2010 at 3:17 PM

    >As an adopted child, Eric Shayman has no idea of the sins his father passed down upon him until he is forced into a battle with the sinister evil of "Legion".



  312. Elena on June 2, 2010 at 3:16 PM

    >The most disturbing realization surrounding my father’s mysterious death wasn’t how oblivious people had been regarding his scheming girlfriend, but the revelation I had suddenly inherited this sociopath.



  313. Julie Rowe on June 2, 2010 at 3:07 PM

    >A vampire at the bottom of the food chain is forced to protect the alcoholics he feeds from when a serial killer begins ripping their throats out one by one.



  314. Nikki Hootman on June 2, 2010 at 2:59 PM

    >A reclusive programmer must overcome his crippling fear of intimacy to win the heart of a small town girls' basketball coach.



  315. Nick Daniels on June 2, 2010 at 2:56 PM

    >As a religious war engulfs the Middle East, an Islamic commander questions his faith and tries to end the jihad while two armies pursue him.



  316. onetarot on June 2, 2010 at 2:54 PM

    >A grandfather discovers chunks of his life are missing after a mysterious trauma traps him in a haunting, yet increasingly familiar landscape.



  317. John M. UpChurch on June 2, 2010 at 2:48 PM

    >Trace Hollister knows he'll be caught for the murder of his ex; he just needs to chase a myth first.



  318. MK on June 2, 2010 at 2:43 PM

    >With humanity at the mercy of the Underworld, the gods, previously slain by Hades’ hand, seek the help of an ordinary man to dethrone him.



  319. Caleb Breakey on June 2, 2010 at 2:42 PM

    >When two societies demand the allegiance of Dakota Huntley and his two companions, the powerful threesome must conquer their emotive wrangles to save the world from a second Armageddon.



  320. Heather Sunseri on June 2, 2010 at 2:42 PM

    >A young missionary returns to Costa Rica to unlock memories masking the brutal murder of her first love’s father.



  321. Deborah K. White on June 2, 2010 at 2:31 PM

    >The new, teenage Queen of Norida must discover who's trying to kill her when her councilors are more interested in controlling her than protecting her.



  322. SB on June 2, 2010 at 2:30 PM

    >Here's my pitch for "Psychopomp", the paranormal YA novel I'm currently trying to get represented:

    A bickering brother and sister are hired as Reapers, and must work together to save their home town from a dark entity that steals souls.



  323. Missy on June 2, 2010 at 2:27 PM

    >A self-conscious young woman finds her worth when she meets the immortal artist who painted her into being and becomes the only person who can save her school from destruction.



  324. Heather on June 2, 2010 at 2:22 PM

    >Here's the logline for one of my YA fantasy novels (in the plotting process):
    An Elvish Gift-Bearer is assigned to protect two nobles–but how can he do so when his deadly past is hunting him?



  325. Kimberley Troutte on June 2, 2010 at 2:21 PM

    >When two old voodoo priestesses accidentally alter the future, an American philanthropist determined to pull the funding from a failed clinical trial, and a beautiful Haitian doctor struggling to save her patients lives, are plunged into the epicenter of the largest earthquake Haiti has ever known.



  326. BiMbyLaDs** on June 2, 2010 at 2:19 PM

    >A married woman's faith is tested to breaking point when she falls in love with an illegal immigrant with a shady past.



  327. John Harris on June 2, 2010 at 2:12 PM

    >A veteran and jadded CIA agent begins to lose his memory, and he and the woman doctor helping him must quickly discover the cause before the man assigned to neutralize him succeeds in a coverup that could revive the agent's fading and disappointing career.



  328. leenietwins on June 2, 2010 at 2:11 PM

    >Becca is barely holding things together when the discovery of her husbands infidelity pushes her to flee to a cabin in the mountains where she is forced to discover the truth about her past, and find herself, before it’s too late.



  329. - Jennifer Swan (In Wake of a Following) on June 2, 2010 at 2:06 PM

    >When a neighboring farmwife claims messages from the Virgin Mary, Florence Swan must follow her husband’s bizarre fanaticism or remain dedicated to her chosen faith.



  330. Rachel on June 2, 2010 at 1:59 PM

    >Demons and dead werewolves are just the first layer of dust on the coffin for Lilah, who's conflicted about pretty much everything-especially her heart, and she has to make a decision before her home is destroyed by demonic magic.



  331. erinschultz on June 2, 2010 at 1:50 PM

    >Seventeen-year-old Brynja must escape from the Ice Palace and its depraved beast-king before she too becomes a beast.



  332. kentsageek on June 2, 2010 at 1:48 PM

    >In his struggle to escape a serial killer's twisted gift of salvation, Aleck Capstain reconciles his painful past and realizes angels among his fellow homeless, watched over him all along.



  333. Jen on June 2, 2010 at 1:42 PM

    >A commercial fishing family suffers a tragedy on board their vessel that threatens to end four generations of making a living by the sea.



  334. TraciB on June 2, 2010 at 1:40 PM

    >Thanks for the challenge, Rachelle! Here is my entry, for my novel Chantal's Call:

    Returning to the town founded by her family, Chantal finds her sister entangled in a cult and struggles to free her from its leader’s hold.



  335. Katie Ganshert on June 2, 2010 at 1:36 PM

    >Came to check out the loglines. 164 and day one's not even over yet! I don't envy you, Rachelle! So many of these are awesome (and clever).

    P.S. Kudos to Peg. Your hot-boy-turned-step-brother line made me laugh out loud. I don't know if that predicament would be awesome or horrible.



  336. SquirlGirl on June 2, 2010 at 1:36 PM

    >After a secret, seven-year affair with the prince, a Chicago woman must prove that their relationship and her life are no threat to the illegitimate queen.



  337. SoloTraveler on June 2, 2010 at 1:34 PM

    >One Lap, No Jetlag by Michael Hodson

    On his 42nd birthday Michael cast aside his normal life and started his quest to backpack around the globe in a year using no airplanes or advance reservations.



  338. Valerie on June 2, 2010 at 1:28 PM

    >When Sophie's boyfriend vanishes, she sets out to find him and discovers plenty of other things in the process; a child, a murder, the mafia, and a bit of herself as well.



  339. Heidi on June 2, 2010 at 1:23 PM

    >A struggling teen falls for a handsome plane crash survivor, only to discover he might be an alien and she might not be exactly human herself.



  340. T. Anne on June 2, 2010 at 1:22 PM

    >A woman falls for the detective she hires to find her best friends killer, but his secrets get in the way.



  341. Kate on June 2, 2010 at 1:19 PM

    >Traumatized by a childhood in which the people closest to her disappeared, Casey acknowledges her demons through writing an assignment and finds the courage to pursue a relationship with the equally scarred Mark.



  342. Tracy on June 2, 2010 at 1:12 PM

    >Wry, wrung-out suburban mom doggedly pursues her dream of visiting all 50 U.S. states before her 50th birthday without going broke, abandoning her children or divorcing her husband.



  343. Terri on June 2, 2010 at 1:03 PM

    >The Making of Angels by Terri Michel
    "What happens when an angel faces evil and the salvation of the world is on the line?"



  344. Botanist on June 2, 2010 at 12:59 PM

    >Great post, Rachelle, and look at all those entries already! You didn't mention any genre guidelines so I hope a sci-fi offering is OK…

    An assassin, determined to exact revenge for the destruction of her home world, is compelled to help those she has spent years trying to destroy.



  345. ggdouglas on June 2, 2010 at 12:50 PM

    >Susana Cavares flees her husband during a deadly hurricane only to be falsely imprisoned for manslaughter in its aftermath crushing her hope for freedom.



  346. Lena S. on June 2, 2010 at 12:47 PM

    >After Prince Nine awakes in an underground castle as one of twelve enchanted princes, he must escape the cycle of nightly dances to save an innocent beast and stop the world from collapsing.



  347. Megan DiMaria on June 2, 2010 at 12:45 PM

    >The discovery of an ugly secret compels a woman to travel to her hometown to unravel a mystery that could destroy her family.



  348. K Simmons on June 2, 2010 at 12:32 PM

    >When a strange man appears in April Singer's dreams, she ignores him with the same determination that helped her out of a paralyzing past – but her determination becomes problematic when her dream man shows up in the flesh and has been dreaming of her, too.



  349. Sylvie on June 2, 2010 at 12:25 PM

    >This is for Darkness Awakens, my fantasy novel.

    To save her home and the eleven other Webbed Worlds from being destroyed, Ayana must journey to far off lands to discover the secrets of the Dark One and break the enchantment that is siphoning the magic of the Web.



  350. Ryan Crafton on June 2, 2010 at 12:19 PM

    >Deamostyns our benefactors called them in their harmonic language, but we used a fouler term, one closer to our hearts and the fables of our youth. We surviving humans called them "Deamons"…



  351. Dana on June 2, 2010 at 12:14 PM

    >Contest entry:

    Shiloh's art career was just taking off when two things happened – she was given guardianship of her sister and a widower came to town.



  352. GRGreene on June 2, 2010 at 12:07 PM

    >Against the backdrop of North Carolina’s Crystal Coast, a struggling young woman marries a dying man for money, but the lessons she learns about love, faith and grief will force her to choose between following her heart or her new-found faith.



  353. Lynda Elkin on June 2, 2010 at 12:00 PM

    >Just For Show (A memoir)

    From Spandex clad demo model and ultrasound guinea pig to riding in a blimp high over the Las Vegas strip, a "Booth Babe" looks back at surviving the Trade Show industry.



  354. Linda Yezak on June 2, 2010 at 12:00 PM

    >Fun contest! Here's my stab at it:

    New York City socialite Patricia Talbert inherits a Texas ranch where she learns about faith and love from the back of a bull.



  355. Jaimie on June 2, 2010 at 11:52 AM

    >When Ares, God of War, regrets his life of senseless slaughter, he leaves Olympus to live as a single father in America.



  356. Daron D. Fraley on June 2, 2010 at 11:49 AM

    >On the planet Gan, the heir to the throne and a young enemy soldier covenant to stop a war between their tribes, unaware that the sign of Christ's birth on an unknown world, Earth, is about to appear in the heavens.



  357. Ricardo Bare on June 2, 2010 at 11:47 AM

    >Jack of Hearts, by Ricardo Bare

    Guilt over the death of his sister forces a boy to surrender his broken heart to the Lady of Twilight and become her enchanted assassin, but when a girl trapped in a mirror makes him feel again he rebels.



  358. Virginia McGarity on June 2, 2010 at 11:36 AM

    >Seventeen year old Samantha McGuire gets caught up in a high stakes game of biological weapons intelligence, espionage and zombie classmates.



  359. Kendra on June 2, 2010 at 11:31 AM

    >A few drinks have always done the trick to help Marisol forget her brother’s suicide, but when her newly sober mother begins to deny he existed in the first place, she embarks on a quest to unearth the truth that takes her through the dark underbelly of North Miami and ultimately forces her to face her own demons.



  360. Adam Heine on June 2, 2010 at 11:25 AM

    >A cowardly bookworm receives a package from his supposedly-dead mother, and he joins a crew of air pirates to find her.



  361. Liberty Speidel on June 2, 2010 at 11:19 AM

    >When Amanda's real estate tenants turn up dead, she realizes she can't ignore the past since it's come back to haunt her.

    ***************

    Interestingly enough, a writer's site I belong to recently had a challenge to do your summary in the size of a Tweet!



  362. Nicole on June 2, 2010 at 11:14 AM

    >In the dawn of World War II, Hollywood's newest "It" girl returns home after twelve years to discover concealing her dark secrets and deteriorating health the most challenging act of her career.



  363. The Napkin Dad on June 2, 2010 at 11:14 AM

    >A father, using simple napkins to teach profound lessons to his teenage daughters, finds them touching the world in ways he could have never imagined.



  364. Sarahsalt on June 2, 2010 at 11:11 AM

    >When Ella’s grandmother claims Ella literally walked on water when she was four, the younger woman begins a journey to discover the truth that includes romance with a preacher; lessons in dying; and a very special child on the way to learning what it means to have faith.



  365. Jennifer on June 2, 2010 at 11:10 AM

    >Emma Carter must fight for sanity and life against both seen and unseen enemies when she and her friends are kidnapped by a sick, game-obsessed stranger who is bent on transforming them into real-life characters from an online game.



  366. Kiley on June 2, 2010 at 10:58 AM

    >When her brother the Lord Highest of Sorenne is forced into banishment for becoming Wolven, Illara Tevaren struggles to conceal her own dangerous lycanthropy while searching for a cure to the Wolven curse – only to fall into a trap that threatens the very foundations of the world itself.



  367. Nicole Zoltack on June 2, 2010 at 10:55 AM

    >A magical pen unleashes a young teen's power to control a fantasy land, a realm only she can save from evil.



  368. Bluestocking on June 2, 2010 at 10:49 AM

    >English born but Norman blooded, Isobel Dumont struggles to keep her home and heart intact when William the Conqueror sends his knights to her father's holding after the Battle of Hastings.



  369. Lisa_Gibson on June 2, 2010 at 10:48 AM

    >When Nigh gets banished to Earth by a jealous rival, Zenith finds her and together they search for a portal home in order to restore Nigh's existence on Galaxia.



  370. kathy taylor on June 2, 2010 at 10:43 AM

    >When a 1950’s Seminole Indian family embraces the love of Jesus, they discover the harsh realities of resistance to their newfound faith and a deacon whose hypocrisy and control extend beyond the sanctuary doors.



  371. Erinn on June 2, 2010 at 10:38 AM

    >To win back his high school girlfriend and to get his life on track, Colin launches his band to rock stardom, seeking revenge in the process.



  372. Neil Ostroff on June 2, 2010 at 10:38 AM

    >An alien invasion isn’t always preceded by breaking news reports and world-wide military reaction, sometimes the only person who knows is a thirteen-year-old boy.



  373. Teresa on June 2, 2010 at 10:32 AM

    >A Rose for Guillermo – A re-telling of Beauty and the Beast where Beauty isn’t beautiful, the castle is haunted, and Guillermo must solve the mystery of the rose or become a beast forever.



  374. Shelley Watters on June 2, 2010 at 10:28 AM

    >BLUE LOTUS by Shelley Watters (YA Paranormal Romance)

    Anna’s life is turned upside down when she meets a stranger that she has been dreaming about for months, and discovers a past that she didn’t know she had.

    FYI – the mss is not finished yet, not sure if this disqualifies me. It's currently at 60k words



  375. E. L. Schneider on June 2, 2010 at 10:24 AM

    >Undead isn’t the problem for sixteen-year-old Kat, nor is being hunted by the Romulaires for her soul – but surviving the bond to an arrogant celebrity, might kill her, again.



  376. Amanda G on June 2, 2010 at 10:21 AM

    >In an alternate United States, independent contractor and recovering alcoholic Marcus Brenner risks his freedom to protect friends and strangers from the police division that enforces Christianity's criminalization.



  377. K.L. Brady on June 2, 2010 at 10:15 AM

    >After breaking up with her most recent “the one,” a late thirty-something realizes she’s suffering from chronic Wrong Men-itis and searches her nightmares of boyfriends past for the cause—and the cure.



  378. Kaye George on June 2, 2010 at 10:15 AM

    >As the dark seasons become colder and longer, mammoth herds flee before the approaching glacier and Enga Dancing Flower knows her telepathic Neanderthal tribe is in trouble.



  379. Jeremy on June 2, 2010 at 10:13 AM

    >Color Me Crazy – by Jeremy Bustin
    Diagnosed with schizophrenia and committed to St. Dympna Mental Hospital, a young painter uses art to fight for his sanity and his life.



  380. Valerie on June 2, 2010 at 10:11 AM

    >Love and Kudzu:
    Four Georgia residents take a whack at revitalizing their town and their love lives with a killer-weed festival, Victoria's secrets, Dr. Phil's Relationship Rescue rules, and a local cop's tough-love tactics.



  381. Michael Ford on June 2, 2010 at 10:11 AM

    >Troubled Times by Michael S. Ford

    Six friends run for the mountains, surviving in the wild and dodging a corrupt government that is now headed by a General who has dreams of total power.



  382. Karen Adair on June 2, 2010 at 10:10 AM

    >After a fire robs Kate of her beloved father, she finds herself struggling to let go of the past before it can literally destroy what’s left of her future—and the boy who goes with it.



  383. Mac on June 2, 2010 at 10:09 AM

    >When the king names seventeen-year-old Lord Justen regent and heir over powerful dukes, his life depends upon leveraging his growing arcane powers, and quickly building a power base.



  384. Alisa on June 2, 2010 at 10:06 AM

    >When 10-year-old Sadie Marie’s grandparents’ farm faces foreclosure, she must find a way to save the only home she has left with the help of a boy, a cow and her dead father’s treasure map.
    -House of Pennies



  385. Kay Bigelow on June 2, 2010 at 10:06 AM

    >A Bishop, a Rabbi, and thirteen women have been killed and the only evidence is blood, lumps of flesh, and two right hands belonging to the same person.



  386. Melissa on June 2, 2010 at 10:02 AM

    >A wayfarer finds redemption in familial bonds when he’s drawn into his nephew’s quest to fulfill his late father’s dream of turning an injured retriever into a field champion.



  387. Daniel Smith on June 2, 2010 at 10:02 AM

    >After an assassin begins stalking his family and kills his detective father, a thirteen-year-old must uncover his family’s secret past to survive.



  388. Margaret on June 2, 2010 at 9:59 AM

    >Camellia Stafford finds that going home again gets complicated when she gets caught between the sexy ghost haunting her bedroom, and a gorgeous neighbor encouraging her to chase her dreams.



  389. mary bailey on June 2, 2010 at 9:57 AM

    >Grieving for her mother, Sabrina flees home for a life on the road with her dangerous boyfriend, who grapples with pain from his own past.



  390. Thomas Dowler on June 2, 2010 at 9:55 AM

    >Victor Bartleby is so desperate to get his coming-of-age novel published that he'll do *almost* anything.



  391. Lena Nelson Dooley on June 2, 2010 at 9:55 AM

    >A wounded travel magazine writer heads to Australia to discover why the father she’d long believed dead had really deserted her when she was five.



  392. Sara Richardson on June 2, 2010 at 9:55 AM

    >When a pastor’s daughter is murdered, he vows to protect his granddaughter from the evil still lurking in their small town no matter what it costs.



  393. jamesbcarroll on June 2, 2010 at 9:53 AM

    >Reviewing the origins and impact of today’s dichotomy, a new paradigm is offered for the relationship between social action and evangelism in 21st century Christianity.



  394. Tammy Plunkett on June 2, 2010 at 9:53 AM

    >A kick-ass heart surgeon, hung-up on a terminal patient, is thwarted by a hot researcher who is not sharing his discovery until it is stolen and they are fighting for their own lives.



  395. shellie on June 2, 2010 at 9:52 AM

    >When seventeen-year-old Robyn Stanley is challenged by a reporter, she must defend her team's right to pray without people's permission while battling an ambitious demon.



  396. goldchevy on June 2, 2010 at 9:50 AM

    >Magically transported to the wilds of Africa, an unmotivated high school freshman must save a species on the brink of extinction, without becoming extinct himself.



  397. P.A.Brown on June 2, 2010 at 9:49 AM

    >In 1929 LAPD the only difference between the cops and the gangsters were their badges and Billy Brewster must decide which side he's on.



  398. J. Nelson Leith on June 2, 2010 at 9:47 AM

    >"When the ship carrying Marcus Reider sailed into Lemaigne, the city's Observer had no idea this would overturn his loyalty to the Security Corps, and his sense of reality."



  399. Emmaserene on June 2, 2010 at 9:46 AM

    >After being catapulted to fame as an assassination suspect, chef wannabe Tommie Apple opens a chain of restaurants with a mute island-esque bodyguard who not only saves her life, but shows her the meaning of it.



  400. Aimee Laine on June 2, 2010 at 9:45 AM

    >Great contest! 🙂 Here are my 26 words. 🙂

    Fate brought Cupid’s Psychotherapist and the god of War together, but her disbelief of fairy tale love and his meddlesome kin could shelve their happily ever.



  401. Wendy Paine Miller on June 2, 2010 at 9:45 AM

    >My women’s fiction, Noble Efforts to Engulf the Moon

    Cocooned inside a Nantucket cottage, one woman must decide whether she’ll risk every emblem of security in her life to protect her precocious young neighbor suffering the same abuse the woman endured as a child.



  402. Shelli (srjohannes) on June 2, 2010 at 9:41 AM

    >When tween angel Gabby is assigned to protect her school nemesis, she quickly discovers what can happen when you hate someone to death.



  403. The Spirit Guide on June 2, 2010 at 9:41 AM

    >With tuition fees looming, Cassia Tiponi is forced to offer herself as a guinea pig to the science department which, after learning her blood is one of a kind, triggers her abduction and eventual manhunt by a secret sect of the government.



  404. D L Rivermoore on June 2, 2010 at 9:40 AM

    >Irinia has found the perfect hiding place from the chaos of the world, an asylum, however when her father blows his brains out on a commentator's lap on national television, Irinia has more than a few obstacles to navigate before she can discover what, exactly, she is escaping from.



  405. Jessica Nelson on June 2, 2010 at 9:38 AM

    >I really love reading these! So many stories…



  406. Joan Ball on June 2, 2010 at 9:37 AM

    >A highly rational, successful woman who had it all candidly shares the story of her radical life change as she moved from Christ-bashing atheism to the unexpected moment when, at age 37, she was dramatically and unexpectedly “struck Christian."



  407. Arlene on June 2, 2010 at 9:36 AM

    >As reluctant winners of a cable TV network contest, a painfully shy woman and outgoing man — neither of them seeking a spouse — must marry and live together for 90 days, learning true love — not cold, hard cash — is the real prize.



  408. Elizabeth Flora Ross on June 2, 2010 at 9:33 AM

    >A generation of women struggle with the most important decision of their lives, and learn there is no one "right" way to be a good mom.



  409. catehart on June 2, 2010 at 9:32 AM

    >A self-determined teenage girl falls for the enigmatic singer of a local band, only to discover their forbidden love breaks Heaven's law and brings Hell after them.



  410. Atom on June 2, 2010 at 9:28 AM

    >After a breakup, a man dates a hundred girls in one hundred days, in an attempt to recapture the butterflies.



  411. Jo Parfitt on June 2, 2010 at 9:27 AM

    >The Windtower by Jo Parfitt
    In the expat melting pot of Dubai, Maya and her international friends explore their misplaced identity, tragedy and fantasy as dreams are built and laid waste beneath the desert sun.



  412. Annie McMahon on June 2, 2010 at 9:27 AM

    >When nature-loving Emilio and athletic Hans get lost in the mountain during a school field trip, they must put aside their enmity and combine their personal skills to find their way out.



  413. Jm Diaz on June 2, 2010 at 9:26 AM

    >A killer finds the perfect place to hide: within the mind of the man chasing him.



  414. Andrew Hamilton on June 2, 2010 at 9:25 AM

    >After finding his dead mother's secret diary written in a foreign language, an emotionally closed man embarks to not only reveal her tragic life story and his father’s potential identity but also attempt translating the love, sin, and pain of his past into a roadmap for his future.



  415. LB on June 2, 2010 at 9:25 AM

    >Salvation-obsessed vampires led by a reluctant human unbeliever embark on a fast-paced quest to avoid vampire hunters and find the key to "vampire redemption."



  416. Kerri on June 2, 2010 at 9:24 AM

    >When Quinn Parker starts an innocent Question of the Day blog, she has no idea that the biggest question of all will change her life.



  417. Dr. Michael G. Tucker on June 2, 2010 at 9:23 AM

    >Learn how to be a noble leader in the Age of Celebrity; let former Dallas Cowboy head coach Tom Landry show you the way to genuine and effective leadership ar any level.



  418. Noel on June 2, 2010 at 9:21 AM

    >In 1823, one freed slave surmounted the seemingly impassable barriers of gender, marital status, and race to become the first single woman missionary of the American Missionary Movement.



  419. Jaycee on June 2, 2010 at 9:19 AM

    >Title of Book: Light of Sorbonne

    When Eva encounters a sudden mandate to move to Paris at the age of 8 her world breaks down, up until one generation later when her own daughter battles with her identity too in this foreign land and finds out the main reason why she came to be there.



  420. Nancy Naigle on June 2, 2010 at 9:17 AM

    >OUT OF FOCUS by Nancy Naigle

    A community comes together after an accident leaves a renowned photographer widowed and looking for her son who was missing from the wreckage.

    Nancy Naigle
    Love stories from the crossroad of small town and suspense.
    http://www.NancyNaigle.com



  421. K. Robert Campbell on June 2, 2010 at 9:16 AM

    >A country lawyer risks his life outmaneuvering terrorists, an approaching hurricane, and possibly the FBI, trying to prevent a national catastrophe.



  422. mememememeee on June 2, 2010 at 9:14 AM

    >Two PhD students win a competition and find themselves in a French Chateau with a diamond, a thief and a murderer and the sneaking suspicion that maybe they shouldn't save the day.

    (Btw, thank you very much for running such a brilliant competiton. Really got me thinking! Roshni)



  423. raymondmasters on June 2, 2010 at 9:14 AM

    >After awakening in a house sideways of reality, Kade Truth searches for answers to his death, rebirth, amnesia, and newly acquired flight and energy-based abilities.



  424. RJ on June 2, 2010 at 9:11 AM

    >Ilian loses his home, his father, and his very soul when a red-haired woman steps into his life, forcing him on a journey that will shake the foundations of the world.



  425. Olga on June 2, 2010 at 9:10 AM

    >In a world where partners are chosen by sexual compatibility, and nobility is chosen by blood (literally), can love blossom between a blue-blood and a sneaky, troublesome, stubborn Commoner?



  426. Richard Mabry on June 2, 2010 at 9:06 AM

    >Rumors that she’s a mercy-killer follow a young doctor to a new town, and she finds it’s hard to fight them when she’s not sure they’re untrue.
    –Diagnosis Death



  427. Katt on June 2, 2010 at 9:04 AM

    >He intends to stop her, using trickery and seduction, but she twists him up like a pretzel and he can't derail her from her mission.



  428. David on June 2, 2010 at 9:03 AM

    >They're mean, they're green, they're a baseball team–the Ivy League All-Stars.



  429. David on June 2, 2010 at 9:00 AM

    >They're mean, they're green, they're a baseball team–the Ivy League All-
    Stars.



  430. T.J. on June 2, 2010 at 9:00 AM

    >When a wizard kidnaps his sister, 14-year old Elijah Harrison steals a magical jewel that can help rescue her and enters a world like the ones in his favorite fantasy series.



  431. Queen Mab on June 2, 2010 at 9:00 AM

    >A self-serving ghost seeks penitence by drawing two people together; hoping their happiness will absolve her guilt.

    Note: I have read it needs to about 12 words.



  432. marynoel on June 2, 2010 at 8:58 AM

    >A cannibalistic death priest tries to beat the gods at their own game before his prince becomes the catalyst for the apocalypse.



  433. Charity Bradford on June 2, 2010 at 8:55 AM

    >When a lonely scientist’s nightmares become reality, she must embrace her magical abilities to save her planet from an invading alien force.



  434. Terry Shames on June 2, 2010 at 8:50 AM

    >Small-town lawyer Jenny Sandstone says, "Rodell wouldn't know how to investigate his way out of an outhouse with two doors," so ex-Police Chief Samuel Craddock knows he has to come out of retirement to find out who murdered his old friend Dora Lee Parjeter.



  435. mzmackay on June 2, 2010 at 8:46 AM

    >I apologize for the double entry. I must have pressed send twice.



  436. Lynnda - Passionate for the Glory of God on June 2, 2010 at 8:45 AM

    >The Trip of a Lifetime
    When culture shock hits a person born into God’s kingdom, a Christian journeys best with a travel guide to read along the way, identifying pitfalls and detours, smoothing out naive expectations, and pointing out God’s marvelous provisions as he passes through each stage of growth on the road leading to Spiritual Maturity.



  437. mzmackay on June 2, 2010 at 8:44 AM

    >Lovers, Robert and Rebecca, allowed their insecurities tore them apart, only to find out who they truly are.



  438. mzmackay on June 2, 2010 at 8:44 AM

    >Lovers, Robert and Rebecca, allowed their insecurities tore them apart, only to find out who they truly are.



  439. Pam Harris on June 2, 2010 at 8:44 AM

    >Sassy Savannah and quiet Alicia have nothing in common–until they find out their boyfriends are lovers.



  440. Laci on June 2, 2010 at 8:42 AM

    >Being the new girl in school and where first impressions can haunt you forever, seventeen-year-old Rachel Bronson does a hell of a job attracting the killer guy.



  441. Katy McKenna on June 2, 2010 at 8:40 AM

    >When a hospice worker's own frail mother turns annoyingly chatty about the past, the nurse must choose whether to kill her softly (and not with her song!) or to live with the horrible consequences of the old gal's mouth gone mad.



  442. Cherie on June 2, 2010 at 8:38 AM

    >Memoir: A mom trying to reconcile her Midwestern sensibilities with her Manhattan surroundings learns she has advanced cancer and vows to raise her toddler son her way as long as she can.



  443. Susie on June 2, 2010 at 8:34 AM

    >Astrologer Di Darwin solves a murder in DownEast Maine using a horoscope chart as guide in "Lobster Red Aries." the first of twelve Zodiac Mysteries.



  444. Heidiopia on June 2, 2010 at 8:27 AM

    >As a new and unwilling owner of a ramshackle USVI hotel, divorced mother of two Holly Thompson must confront her own demons and an island crime ring that threaten her fragile family.



  445. Timothy Fish on June 2, 2010 at 8:22 AM

    >To provide protection when near fatal accidents on a movie set are directed at a friend, a waitress disguises herself as her friend’s assistant.



  446. Jen J. on June 2, 2010 at 8:18 AM

    >When a single human bone is found on a lonely stretch of coastline, a determined homicide detective and a reluctant scientist agree to join forces to bring a serial killer to justice.



  447. JamesBrett on June 2, 2010 at 8:15 AM

    >Colonel Bradford's Crush by James Brett

    A decorated World War II veteran falls madly in love with Cheetos — I mean madly in love.



  448. Shmologna on June 2, 2010 at 8:12 AM

    >One word shy of 25. That was hard!!!

    "In the 19th century Great Smokies, Cora Proffitt marries a widower whose mountain of bitterness casts a shadow on Cora's dreams of true love."



  449. Ken Hannahs on June 2, 2010 at 8:12 AM

    >Southern Hospitality (working title)
    By: Ken Hannahs

    Two best friends must escape from a decrepit southern plantation by unveiling its mysteries, all while keeping their own dark secrets hidden from each other.



  450. Peg on June 2, 2010 at 8:11 AM

    >Here's mine:

    What happens when the hottest boy in school becomes your stepbrother?



  451. apolson on June 2, 2010 at 8:06 AM

    >An eighteen year old girl finds out she is pregnant with the child of her much older, illegal immigrant boyfriend, and must somehow reconcile her new future with her faith, her family, and her dreams.



  452. David A. Todd on June 2, 2010 at 8:06 AM

    >An American couple's rocky marriage is stretched to the breaking point as they become embroiled in a CIA operation in Red China.



  453. Christine on June 2, 2010 at 8:05 AM

    >A radio star’s celibacy vow is challenged when her station hires her ultimate fantasy man to guard her while she embarks on a promotional tour.



  454. Terri Tiffany on June 2, 2010 at 8:03 AM

    >An unemployed CEO and his wife receive a letter on Christmas Eve claiming a farm awaits them in rural PA, even though they aren’t the lawful heirs.



  455. Kersley Fitzgerald on June 2, 2010 at 8:00 AM

    >Sana's heartbroken when her new Sea Swimmer grandmother treats her more like a servant than family, but terrified of the day the woman will discover Sana is growing wings like her father–and rightfully so.



  456. Kathy Grubb on June 2, 2010 at 7:59 AM

    >Two grown siblings, Pastor's kids, reluctantly return to their hometown in northeastern Oklahoma with a message of grace which revitalizes their congregation and destroys their father's ministry.



  457. Jim Marr on June 2, 2010 at 7:49 AM

    >A husband learns valuable lessons about love, forgiveness, and God’s perfect timing, when his dying wife confesses a thirty-year deception and rededicates her life to Jesus Christ



  458. Christine Hammar on June 2, 2010 at 7:46 AM

    >"After Mrs. Rask literally stumbles over a body, she unravels an old secret and must find the killer before her sister becomes the next victim.”



  459. Shelby on June 2, 2010 at 7:44 AM

    >In the fall of 1973 in Alabama, nine year old Addie Campbell, vexed with ancient memories and guided only by starlight and stones, unearths long buried secrets along the banks of the Tennessee River.



  460. J.K. Coi on June 2, 2010 at 7:42 AM

    >Failing to escape the witch’s oven, a young girl falls through a portal to a dangerous world and spends years searching for the trail of breadcrumbs that will lead her home, despite the interference of the goblin king who would claim her for his own.



  461. Amanda Acton on June 2, 2010 at 7:27 AM

    >A 12 year old girl’s fight to prove that her cousin is more than just an imaginary friend leads her into the peculiar world of Nowhere Place.



  462. Emily Casey on June 2, 2010 at 7:26 AM

    >A ghost comes back from the dead to save the girl he loves.



  463. Amy Sue Nathan on June 2, 2010 at 7:22 AM

    >When a pink-haired, multi-pierced, eighteen-year-old college student flies across country and meets the starched-and-pressed father who doesn't know she exists, she grapples whether to return to the family and life she knows, or stay with the family and life she thought she always wanted.



  464. Lynn on June 2, 2010 at 7:19 AM

    >A young woman is keeping a secret from her new love, but it is his secret that will save her life.



  465. A. Grey on June 2, 2010 at 7:18 AM

    >Here's what I've been using for my dystopian YA EVERNOW:

    After the world she grew up in is irrevocably altered, a girl named Evernow determines to live by her own rules in the fractured world she’s been left with, even if that means treading a fine line between species and the battles taking place between them.



  466. Nikki on June 2, 2010 at 7:14 AM

    >Woot! Here's the pitch for Blessing in Disguise, a middle-grade novel:

    Just moved to Luling, "the armpit of Texas,"because of her Dad's job, a preacher's kid with a reputation for accidental miracle-working decides to break all 10 Commandments to get him fired and her family sent back to their old hometown, where her best friend is waiting.



  467. Martina on June 2, 2010 at 7:07 AM

    >Plunged into a world of forgotten power and forbidden love, 17-year-old half-mortal Michaela fights to keep a vengeful goddess from unleashing the evil children Michaela's father banished.



  468. Phoenix on June 2, 2010 at 6:58 AM

    >SECTOR C, a near-future thriller

    When a cloning project reintroduces the pandemic that wiped out the Ice Age megabeasts, a veterinarian and a CDC investigator battle to keep humans from becoming the next target for extinction.



  469. Richard Mabry on June 2, 2010 at 6:57 AM

    >Hey, I may not enter the contest, but my agent just wrote the logline for my forthcoming novel, Medical Error! Thanks, Rachelle.



  470. Betsy Ashton on June 2, 2010 at 6:57 AM

    >“Mad Max” Davies gets a do-over in life, a chance to heal the rift with her estranged daughter who is near death following a accident.



  471. Anonymous on June 2, 2010 at 6:56 AM

    >Abigail Hardy is convinced she is the last 18 year-old virgin alive. One summer at the shore and one boy from Dublin is all it takes to change her life, forever.



  472. Judith Mercado on June 2, 2010 at 6:55 AM

    >Angelica’s Pentecostal family emigrates from Puerto Rico to Indiana, where as she matures she bristles against the strictures of her faith, testing her allegiance to her family.



  473. Todd on June 2, 2010 at 6:41 AM

    >Fifteen-year old Rick pulls Hollywood's hottest actress from the wreckage of a plane, spurring a deadly race through America's last frontier.



  474. The Price of Tea on June 2, 2010 at 6:38 AM

    >The Ficus – A Memoir

    A near-death experience forges a strong bond between Jennifer and Robby, but their self-destructive ways prove to be the biggest obstacle in their path to happily ever after.



  475. scarlettprose on June 2, 2010 at 6:36 AM

    >Rescued (kidnapped) by the United Nations, a smart-mouth civilian doctor must help find the cure to the most recent form of biological warfare—while resisting the advances of a tantalizing but engaged captain of the warship where she’s being held.



  476. Chazley Dotson on June 2, 2010 at 6:32 AM

    >When Nicole decides to become an apprentice wandmaker, she must face dangerous beasts (and the other, dumber apprentices) to gather materials for her first wands.

    The Wandmaker's Apprentice by Chazley Dotson



  477. Amy K. Sorrells on June 2, 2010 at 6:30 AM

    >Like the unfurling of a flower, a fragile woman struggles to believe in friendship and fights to resuscitate hope in a heart long dormant from pain and betrayal.



  478. Susan on June 2, 2010 at 6:27 AM

    >When a staircase portal opens in Madison's backyard cavern, she is drawn into a strange new world where a haunting family mystery begins to unravel and she must defeat the evil Mourgla bent on destroying this beautiful place.



  479. annie-jean on June 2, 2010 at 6:13 AM

    >Sassy Ann deals with death and dying as part of her daily routine, she transitions the departed into their new existence in the plane beyond the one we refer to as life.

    Ardee-ann



  480. Joyce Chng on June 2, 2010 at 6:09 AM

    >Jan Xu has to deal with sibling rivalry, the primal forces of change and need… and being a werewolf in Singapore.



  481. Lynda Schab on June 2, 2010 at 6:09 AM

    >When bodybuilders start turning up dead, a crime-show fanatic and her gym-owner friend set out to uncover why the strong don't survive.



  482. Buffy Andrews on June 2, 2010 at 5:58 AM

    >A young girl learns to live again when her grandma, who dies, leaves her 365 notes, one for every day of the coming year.



  483. Katie Ganshert on June 2, 2010 at 5:54 AM

    >I read the title of your post and thought, "HA! There's no way I'm entering that contest. I'm dreadful at those one-liners." Your prize has forced me to eat my words.

    Here's my attempt at a one-liner for my current WIP:

    When a talented photographer-turned-construction worker reenters the fashion world for a noble cause, an insecure model’s seductive attention challenges his good intentions.



  484. strangexgirl on June 2, 2010 at 5:37 AM

    >Ever-aristocratic Vincent must finally dirty his hands (along with channeling the other three elements) to save the girl from another bloodthirsty vampire, James, while trying to remain undiscovered himself as she investigates the appearance of strange creatures in his suburb.



  485. J. L. Jackson on June 2, 2010 at 5:36 AM

    >Fifteen-summer-old Princess Nitokerti finally breaks free from the sheltered life she’s been forced to live behind the palace walls and finds herself in a world she never before imagined forcing her to choose between the family she’s loved from birth and the man that’s swept into her heart unexpectedly.



  486. Jessica Nelson on June 2, 2010 at 5:24 AM

    >Wow, a subscription would be awesome!!! I'll be back.

    Thanks for the rundown here, too.



  487. Toby Speed on June 2, 2010 at 5:18 AM

    >The murder of her ex-boyfriend’s new sweetie in pancake batter yanks EmmaTrace from her quiet life and forces her to confront her fear of flying.



  488. Jay on June 2, 2010 at 5:11 AM

    >A young, insomniac woman works a day job to save her rock club from financial ruin, while dealing with an old grudge, the blossoming relationship with her new boss, and her arrogant disposition.



  489. Ian on June 2, 2010 at 4:26 AM

    >Twelve-year-old Sarah, journeys into a world full of magic and danger to rescue her kidnapped little sister from an Old God who turns children into books.



  490. Lydia Sharp on June 2, 2010 at 4:12 AM

    >Summer Hoax by Lydia Sharp

    Too-honest Diana plays the fake girlfriend of a still-in-the-closet gay classmate for one summer and must face the truth–she's fallen in love with him.



  491. Phoebe on June 2, 2010 at 4:02 AM

    >When Sofya Cyprowski is accused of killing her husband in 1930s Alaska, she vows to find the real killer–before the hard justice of the Last Frontier is meted out upon her.



  492. Shannon Nicole Wells on June 2, 2010 at 3:44 AM

    >After choosing alcohol over his faith, widower Deric Christy gets more than he bargained for: accused of murder, a shotgun wedding, and a new beginning.



  493. Kim McNiel Smith on June 2, 2010 at 3:37 AM

    >When things are not what they seem, Kimberly must overcome many obstacles in her life, to find herself again…at any costs.



  494. Ri True on June 2, 2010 at 3:36 AM

    >When the old man suddenly appears in her car, Jobie’s infinite connection to inner spirit explains the dreams and doubts that have haunted her life.



  495. lexcade on June 2, 2010 at 3:03 AM

    >When a successful geneticist wakes up as her own experiment's newest success, she must battle her amnesia and new animal instinct to find the truth about why she's involved–but she won't like the answers.



  496. Wen Prior on June 2, 2010 at 2:56 AM

    >A boy who remembers his past-lives finds the girl who’s always shared them, but this time she doesn’t remember him and he must earn her love before she forgets him forever.



  497. Jullie Jordan a.k.a. @Writers_Cafe on June 2, 2010 at 2:31 AM

    >Janelle and Richard have an unusual courtship/marriage in the 1830’s, with time travel, ancient ‘powers,’ kidnapping, amnesia, betrayal and more conspiring to keep them apart.



  498. The Diary Of a Girl on June 2, 2010 at 2:28 AM

    >The Cage; the most brutal battle of them all. The race for power had driven Tija's parents to killing themselves. When Rourke arrives, would her fate be the same?



  499. Layren on June 2, 2010 at 2:16 AM

    >Living Hearts is the true story of my congenital heart defects and the extraordinary generosity of the community around me in helping me to live.



  500. Higley Browne on June 2, 2010 at 1:55 AM

    >Half-angel, half-demon, Alexsi Marks must use her unique bloodline to even the battle between heaven and hell without losing her soul in the process.



  501. Julie Kibler on June 2, 2010 at 1:55 AM

    >When girls sexually assault a deaf teen, his decision to report it jeopardizes his greatest passions – playing football and his relationship with the girl he's loved forever.



  502. Gehayi on June 2, 2010 at 1:53 AM

    >25 words:

    When his best friend Jack shoots himself, Tony is shocked; when Jack's widow insists that he was murdered, Tony knows he must discover the truth.



  503. Weronika Janczuk on June 2, 2010 at 1:22 AM

    >When the Polish communist regime arrests seventeen-year-old Anna Sokolowska's father–among ten thousand other underground revolutionaries–Anna must either betray the freedom for which he fought or risk her life as part of the pro-Solidarity movement.